yeah FUCK JESSICA >:C (all of these comics were adorable you guys did AWESOME)

Coatl: PyrasTerran: TY Shen! I'll try to keep that in mind the next time I try tones thanks for the notes! And yeah Sanari and Sonny did actually break the rules. But Djinn Sanari doesn't give a $%&# and they think the rules are unfair to begin with Plus sonny doesnt beleive in rules as much as he doesn't want to beleive in magic i sense a paradox.

PyrasTerran: TY Shen! I'll try to keep that in mind the next time I try tones thanks for the notes! And yeah Sanari and Sonny did actually break the rules. But Djinn Sanari doesn't give a $%&# and they think the rules are unfair to begin with Plus sonny doesnt beleive in rules as much as he doesn't want to beleive in magic

TY Shen! I'll try to keep that in mind the next time I try tones thanks for the notes! And yeah Sanari and Sonny did actually break the rules. But Djinn Sanari doesn't give a $%&# and they think the rules are unfair to begin with

I kinda feel like Sonny doesnt get a chance to do very much in all three of these lol. im also entertained that all three had the relationship between Sanari and Prince VERY different. Sonny almost feels out of place beside them (maybe he needs a sexy long haired magic dad lol jk) pyras i like that you are trying out screentoning and it looks good for a first go but they all sort of lack contrast and it ends up giving the comic a sort of washed-out gray look. Good job making full use of Prince's vocabulary of terrible puns though lol. The animated page was also really cool. Im with Gregly a bit though, she DID break the rules right? Coatl, Interesting set up, hilarious payoff! I love how sparkly you draw Prince, he cracked me up on page two! The joke with the dads and dr fab at the end was great though you drew Abbas' head kinda weirdly huge in a sort of creepy way. And poor sonny looks like he doesnt want anything to do with any of this shit lol. Its too bad you couldnt have finished it more but you cleaned it up nice and i was able to follow it just fine. Kent, i need to fight this character lol you clear a spot for me in your fight queue cuz im coming for Psychic Prince XD I think you wrote Abbas really well and im very entertained with Psychic King, charming fellow. This is a Dads Of The Year meetup if i ever saw one lol. I like the imaginative landscape but its still a bit empty. Your basketball court looks good though... I was gonna say Sonny does little more in this than flirt but come to think of it thats basically all Prince does too lol. This has good composition and very expressive faces so I like this comic a lot. But since you and pyras went so totally different, in my head now, Sanari is engaged to her cousin XD (thats my fault though lol)

Gregly thanks for the words; Sanari got djinn-mad cause she was called a bleating goat. I'm glad you liked the action~

Gregly: Pyras: this looks amazing for a one week comic! I'm still a bit confused about why she's mad because her being there.. was breaking the rules right? I like the scenario in your comic and there's lots of good angles in the action sequences. Good work! Coatl: I think yours is written the best out of these... Nice and concise and funny. And nice compositions on pages 2 and 3. I wish you had been able to finish this up more but what you have is great! Kent: Your comics always look so good, I love your lines and blacks. It's a cliffhanger obvs, and I don't know if you were planning more pages, but this comic seems mostly about PPs dad than PP himself... But all the characters show good emotion, page four with the dialogue between sanari and sonny was my favorite. Keep it up! I appreciate the feedback, Greg! Stay beautiful!

Pyras: this looks amazing for a one week comic! I'm still a bit confused about why she's mad because her being there.. was breaking the rules right? I like the scenario in your comic and there's lots of good angles in the action sequences. Good work! Coatl: I think yours is written the best out of these... Nice and concise and funny. And nice compositions on pages 2 and 3. I wish you had been able to finish this up more but what you have is great! Kent: Your comics always look so good, I love your lines and blacks. It's a cliffhanger obvs, and I don't know if you were planning more pages, but this comic seems mostly about PPs dad than PP himself... But all the characters show good emotion, page four with the dialogue between sanari and sonny was my favorite. Keep it up!

Coatl: I SEE HOW IT IS RADJI *judging you* nooooooooooooooo the judgment ! it's MELTING MEEEEEEEEE ! ha ha i meant that i couldn't really find anything to criticize ^^ i mean it's a bit od a downer that you couldn't ink but your story was really cool ^^

I SEE HOW IT IS RADJI *judging you*

Radji: thank you~ Cherry Bomb Apartments is where Sanari and Abbas live, i should have made that clearer (and the perspective of that shot I can never get right)

pyrras: like always i like your dynamic art, the only detail that put me off is the fourth panel of the last page. i was kinda confused on that one. Mr Kent: the psychic kingdom kinda remind me of the interior of a top model's head. HAHA HA no seriously i loved it but mayyyyybe the end was a bit fast. Coatl i surprisingly have nothing to say -_-'

hey friends, votes are great but you'd really make our day with a few critiques or any words :)

pyrasterran: cool tournament story, everybody' s a childhood friend, ha ha ^^ Coatl: the birdcage is everywhere, isn't it? MisterKent: Curse you Abbas ! Cuse yeeeeeeeeeeeeew

thanks for the battle, bros, love your stuff~

now that this is up: this is my first time messing with screentones so alot of experimentation and panels look different from each other in terms of methods etc. pretty much just a mess but i hope you enjoy nonetheless~

IM DOIN IT LIVE!

wooooOOOHHH DAMN! Can't wait!

aaaa this is gonna be really cool!!

no lie trying to come up with a story for this combination is freakin' HARD

HAHAHA, I HATE THAT I GOT THE LOWEST RATING OF THE THREE!

oh MY GOOOOOOD

THIS IS HAPPENING!