I never commented on this because I was feeling down about everything and all, but I've been getting better so I wanted to say:
Jesus Christ Gregly.
I mean it in a good way though. Your comic made me laugh.
Hahaha nice.
Elge it's awesome to see you back and posting pages, so I hope we can see more again soon :)
Gregly your writing and pacing is so on point. I always get excited to see stories from you. This was no exception!! Having the girls bumble about at the beginning (Lilly holding the lighter for example) was such a neat touch. It made them feel genuine, like actual teenage girls who also happen to be doing magic. Needless to say the twist at the end was such a surprise! I read these comics a few days ago and I'm still laughing now! Thanks!
It's so cool to see you both posting again, so my only critique is that neither of you post comics enough! More more more!
ELGE- =I
GREGLY- I'm not gonna lie I laughed out loud so hard. This was such a funny and unexpected comic! I'm so used to Gwen and Regi being these squeaky clean partners with equally clean comics, that its become somewhat expected. so color me surprised to not only see this match up, but the resulting comic. you definitely took your opponent (whose themes I think aren't in your usual wheelhouse) and definitely made it your own with hilarious results. The men of void are such sluts for ice cream, I swear!
Gregly- "Hey why did Joey leave my bros-only full nude ice cream party?" I'm screaming this comic was perfect. LOVE all the backgrounds! There is so much detail; it looks great! Sooo happy to see Gwen hanging out with Lilyfeather and Boom. Your comics are just getting better and better! This was a great read.
elge: what the heck man! It's almost every other battle with you that this happens! <_> I think before you get into more fights you should rehearse with a completed beyond battle. Hell you were supposed to make a part 2 BB from our battle a long time ago right?? Now we'll never know why Lesdai wanted to get caught.
Gregly: Pretty funny, I dig it! But for 3 weeks I think you couldv'e added shades or colors, although that 1st page is pretty good for just lines. You should research how to better enhance your scans so they don't end up so jagged-lined.
Keep workin, guys!
sugha: I know you had some family troubles that halted working on this so ill try not to pick on it too much but man i really wish i could have seen more of this, the setup is so great but theres no payoff and that makes a sad shen.
gregly: dude i am ROLLING, HOLY SHIT! XD I mean thanks for the cameo (haha, I love how Lily is the more straight-edge one) but oh my gosh every page of this is gold! the last two especially KILLED me, oh man im gonna have to give a real critique later, i am laughing too hard LOL! all the points, man, oh my god!
Oh hey! Good luck to both of you; I know you can both overcome your slumps and turn in something short and sweet! (In other words, I know you guys both have shit going on in your lives right now, so plan for something really short and I'm sure it'll turn out great!)
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