High hopes for Frank here. No bars and an open door just behind him. Just run, man. Seriously though, this is super engaging. Middle page reminds me of those kinda blurry shots in anime intros with adjusting focus, glowing eye trails and a slight camera shake.

If this is what you're bringing to the SRT, you're gonna be a tough nut to crack. excellent selective use of color. Also, FUCK YOU HIEMIE

I like how everyone is getting their own narrative started. Also I wont comment on Qyz's comic. TOUGH LUCK CHUMP.

Great pacing and storytelling, use of color, engaging narration. I need more of this.