Dudes, and dudetes the story is super simple, so I didn't even bother with dialogue. Kars blasts some door, gets in to some ruins that looks empty, but some artifact flies into his cheats, Boom Rhino teleports there (as the last time we saw him, he took part in nucreal appocalypse - alternative reality much?) and by some reason Kars have more body now... although he won't as Rhino won't have arms.
TDK- Kars is so rapidly becoming a favorite of mine. I love that such a serious and menacing looking character can be so hilarious! I have to agree with the previous comments that I wish your comic looked as good as your first two pages. Your inks really worked well, so the rest of your pages looks really naked by comparison. Still, what you lacked in time, you did not skimp by way of story. It was a subtle, and then not so subtle scar which has me chuckling at the beat before the punchline. Also can we just point out that there is a bus stop outside Kar's stronghold? WAT XD
All in all really funny comic. Keep it up!
WOLICK- I think by comparison, your comic I feel was more visually interesting. Your inks are really lovely and there's real character in the expressions and poses you put Kars and Rhino in that I think your opponent lacks. Though, I feel your story sorta suffered. Nooot quite sure what went down here. It looks pretty fab, but still, kind of in the dark as a reader.
TDK: What a pleasantly long finished and-humerus- comic you have here! Story played out nicely, I enjoyed the scar wasn't very obvious, then I got to the end and was like "oooh right" haha. So yeah, obviously it could have used more attention to the blacks, like in the beginning, but in order to actually finish the comic on time, sacrifices must be made.
Wolcik: I liked your initial first 2 pages and then it was just.. I don't know, nothing really made sense after that. What is that little object in page 3? What is the significance? Why are Dr Rhino and Kars fighting? How is torn clothes even a scar?
omg omg omg.
TDK: I LOVE your storytelling and your sense of humor. Srsly really enjoyed it. Shame it is a bit unfinished, but we can't have it all... But that side chartacter, the head polishing... beautiful
Wolcik: ahh shame it kinda appears unfinished too... Like not in the visuals but like.. Missing few intro pages? D: Love the blacks though!
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