WUTATA, my suomi mies! I think I'm gonna echo most of what was said in that I feel thrown into a situation and unable to get my bearings by the end. Who's that? Where are they? why're they running from Tsumi (everybody loves Tsumi!), is she protecting or fighting Beo? WHAT YEAR IS IT? Still though, if this was a ploy to have everyone go to your older comics to try and figure out what they missed, you succeeded. XD I think the biggest thing I noticed is that the blood on page one is fuzzy. Like she's bleeding clouds or fog. If that's what's she's got in her, then awesome, but it definitely doesn't carry that heavy wet 'blood' feel. The second page had me laughing out loud, though I'm not sure if what Cecilia is saying was done for laughs or just a smidge of language barrier. Still though, it was definitely a wild ride. This is the stuff I'd find channel surfing and settle in to watch in order to find out more. :)

Wu- I gotta be honest, my first read though I thought that was Ancelin until the end of the comic, you changed her hair and costume so suddenly and drastically that I was thrown completely for a loop- I didnt realize it was Cecilia until she started throwing fireballs :I the whole thing is a bit confusing... whats she doing? what are those green lines? why did Beo attack her? I don't have enough information here ^^; Nothin- wait is it called Figment or Fragment? or are there 2? my first readthrough I thought there were 2. I like this direction for Beo, I like the idea that Hiemium makes him some sort of rage-fueled demon-beast, thats sort of rad. It is a bit rushed though which damages the impact. Also like Pyras and Ben I didn't know at first that an arm had been ripped off i thought he was eating like an organ and I was like "what organ is that??" I'm glad to see you battling again and you know I love Beo but i feel like theres not quite enough story happening. Still, i hope to see you do more comics and continue this interesting path.

Wu AT-AT: I like the atmosphere, but, I have, like, no idea what is happening <_> I tried going to the previous comic but it gave me no clues. There's a couple of pose issues in the last two pages especially, on page 7 last panel Beo looks like he's lying on the ground in mid-air. Nothin: Again, I'm flung into a situation with no context eep <_>; Not sure where this is beginning but I am at least able to follow what's happening in the remaining pages, despite the unfinished work. It took me a moment to realize you had ripped out an arm for a scar, at first I had no idea what Beo was eating. Good job turning in stuff and keep on improving, y'all!

WU AT-AT: I'm very confused at to what's going on here. This feels like it's a chunk of a comic near the end, but there's no context as to why Cecilia captured Beo or why she's being chased. I'm sure there was more story that you meant to tell. Make sure to think carefully before outlining your plot what major points you want to hit, like "what has Cecilia been up to" or even "What is Beo's connection with Cecilia". Once you know that the main idea or plot point you want to get across to the reader is, then you can structure events around getting the info to the reader. Also, the visual pacing is very rough. When you lay the panels out, you want to make sure you are giving scenes and events the space they need based on their importance. Page 2 and 3 are a good example of this. You could have combined the panels from 2 and arranged them on the top half (or third) of page 3, and still given half a page of space for that big magic net effect. Then, on page 4, you could have altered the angle to make the crushing effect more dynamic, maybe showing it from the pursuers' point of view. I'd suggest taking a look as some old superhero comics, maybe from Marvel, and see how the panels are laid out to enhance the action. NOTHIN: Same as with Wu At-At's comic, I feel like there is more story that could have been told to set up the event's here. You did a good job with dropping hints in the dialogue, but there's still not quite enough to really cement the characters' motivations. I assume Beo's all fucked up on Heimium exposure, and maybe he's been acting weird and aggressive lately, which is why Tsumi is pissed at him? Also, be careful with using too many wide angle panels. It's always a temptation to use them, since they look so cinematic, but from a layout perspective they don't do much to make the comic look interesting. And what was Cecilia's scar? Is it on her face? Neck? Shoulder? EDIT: After reading Pyras's comment, I totally see the arm Beo is holding. DURP. On a more positive note, great job on not pulling a Bent One and defaulting. Any comic uploaded is worth the time and practice it gives you. I LOVE TO READ ME SOME VOID COMICS. KEEP PUSHING YOURSELVES! You have nowhere to go but in with your talents as story tellers and artists!

PSA: Cecilia is portrayed with long white hair in these.

GET TORE UP FROM THE FLOOR UP

BEOOOO, Aw yiss, good luck to you both!

BEO!?!? I THOUGHT YOU WERE DEAD! *tears of joy*

SWEET c'mon guys lets see some blood!

WHAT BEO WHAT HOLY HELL GOOD LUCK YOU GUYS!

awwwwww yeah, things are gonna get MESSY!