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Awesome Dream
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Uploaded September 23, 2014
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Heathen
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9 years ago
Just have to say, Wolcik, your art quality has come a long, long way in your time here, and while I agree with most of the comments below, I enjoyed this comic. I actually came to Mr. Awesome's page to look into how he became the pathetic visage he has, and was delighted to find that his most recent comic is a surreal retelling of how he got his scars. So thanks for that. Your facial expressions are fantastic, and except for the perspective on the end table, the artwork in that last page is like, professional quality. A good colorist could have a field day with this comic. My only major note would be, and I know this comic is like two years old, so maybe you're past this, but please stop using those horrible fonts for your sound effects. The page where the demon rips Mr. Awesome's flesh off his back is so good, visually, but is marred by that lame "RIIIIP" effect. Seriously, dude, just hand-draw your sound effects, particularly when they're for gruesome, visceral, or otherwise graphic moments, trust me, it'll elevate the entire page, and they're really a lot of fun to do.
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Puzzlething
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11 years ago
I really don't know whats going on. Judging by the ending it seems like it's supposed to be some sort of visualized internal conflict, but it doesn't really seem like we learned much about Mr. Awesome or that he has learned much about himself. Instead of character growth and exploration, it seemed more like an excuse for surreal fights. And that's fine if that's what you wanna do, I just don't think there's enough narrative there to hold me. Ideally a comic should always have something in the story and characters that grab people, something that makes them want to know what they're missing. Just because your character has a lot of history and context, doesn't mean your reader should have to know all of that context going in just to enjoy the story. The inconsistencies are also super jarring, from page to page the way you make lines seems to change. Still, thats a lot of art dude, you're a crazy workhorse!
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Rose
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11 years ago
Oh man! I wish I had links to all of the battles referenced on each page. Mr Awesome has fascinated me ever since Cicatrices Maximus (Bob's insanity has become a lot less violent since then), and I really enjoyed seeing stuff from his delusional point-of-view. Nina hit on all the major issues, and I would have liked more backgrounds somehow, even though he's in some sort of dream... uh... void. (Couldn't think of any other word for that hahah) I enjoyed it, and I hope we can see a little more consistency and polish from you in the future! I know you don't have a ton of time and resources for your comics all the time, so it might just take longer to get comics up, but if they're really well done you'll feel more proud of your work, I think. Anyways, yeah! I am a fan of Mr Awesome. :)
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neens
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11 years ago
this was extremely hard for me to get through. the quality seems to jump page to page. some pages are very neat and clean, some have specks, some have sketchy, weaker lines, pixellation, etc. the drawings/figures look pretty consistant throughout though! I think the interior stuff is better than the cover too. the sketchy lines and color aren't doin it for me. always admire the effort of a 20+ page comic though.
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Wolcik
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11 years ago
I had this as ongoing webcomics for a while, but I couldnt affort to keep the server. I let my cousin read it and it turns out, that it's no use to take Bob out of Void's enviroment. What voiders enjoy as crazy flow to regural reader is a confusing story without crucial information about the past events - even when this is a comics showing them. EDIT - By mistake I posted page 17 in polish (I had this made in two languages). I also should have had added saws to the train.
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