Hi guys, I know this is a little late but i wanted to say thanks to all of you for the comments! Wuta I took on board what you said about the font/that off panel on page 2. I made the font an easier to read one for the printed version of this, as well as tweaking how that bottom panel is laid out. I think I technically broke the 180 rule there because their heads were on different sides? even though the characters were mostly still in the same place in relation. So i think that might be why it got confusing, especially on screen because you have to scroll to see who is saying what, oops! Thanks for the pointers! : D

I was a little lost on exactly what was going on during my first read through. However, I got to the end and was expecting more. I NEED MORE.

I very much enjoyed this, pocketmouse! Fine use of color and shadows--you've really developed a lovely style :)

everything about this is fantastic! The movement, the colours, the panel layout, I'm so jealous! Great work! I loved Tif's snide expression all the time lol! I hope there will be more, I'm very excited to see what will happen with Trixie!

I absolutely loved it! The biggest problem to me is that the for whatever reason, the text is tad bit hard to read - I'm not sure what it is about it. but I had trouble with the first few pages until I got used to it. I was also a little confused on page 2, I feel like there's a missing panel or something between the last two. And in the fourth panel, I had to reread the page to get that the "Bitch you thirsty" was actually Merrik, and not Ehren. Other than that, I had no trouble following it, and what I saw was absolute awesome. Your work is getting really super close to pro-level if ya ask me. Be proud mousey, you're doing absolutely fantastic work.

Real coment later but hoooooly crap those colors <33333

YES! More comics for me to peruse! Go mousey go!

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Thank you for GIANT diamond! It was a fun exercise to write dialogue. So if you guys hate it, don't blame Mouse.

Just some clarification- Jong wrote pretty much all of the dialogue, so please judge this with that fact in mind. (especially since he did such a good job!) SO THANK YOU JONG YOU GIANT DIAMOND. Also thanks Tofu for helping with Ehrens dialect- hopefully it's not been totally butchered now! You guys are all magical fab like a billion enchanted castles, just concentrated into tiny little human form. THANKS LOVE X A MILLION <3 xoxox