Psycho Sean - Aww that sucks dude, but yeah, taking photo's of pages really sucks. Mista Mista Kent Baby - It feels like you had to take alot of time saving shortcuts in this fight, you don't have alot of backgrounds, and they're pretty simple/rough when they are there. Gargonne and AEGIS is a great character, but I think you emote with their faces a little bit more. I know when I design a new character, I sometimes find an animated character with similar features to see how another artist solved those problems of expression. You could always go study Ursula or something, she's p cool. :) I like that the curves and roundness of Gargonne makes you push the dynamism and flow of your forms. And I thought it was hilarious he has his whole melodramatic "These are the beginning of my dastardly self-portraits" but if you go back, they're drawings of stuff like kitties and pine trees. Priceless.

Even if i have no critique to give. I want it to be known that your consistent work is appreciated Kent.

Thanks for giving me the chance to draw Dan, Sean! I really like having such a signature dastardly villain in Void!

also, page 4 is my favorite! Dan's talk all tough, dynamic close up, then i scroll down and... ..."your a creep". I fell laughing sooooo hard on the ground

Man a great first comic for gargonne Kent, the dialogue felt natural and was very amusing. You nailed my character spot on and I can't wait to see what other shenanigans Gargonne gets into As for me I'm sorry but after what the pages for mrnoitaull' battle looked liked, i chose not to post my pages until i can scan them and not do a shitty photo. I do have some pages done and i'll finish the rest of the comic so i can post them as a BB just like the OS-1 battle. I feel really shitty, but i wont mope ill just finish them and post as soon as i can. Again thanks for accepting my challege kent, you really do a great job every time you post!!!

Sokay! I never get mad for lack of thunbs--I know they're a beyotch to do all the time!

Sorry for the lack of thumbs! Had to put these up from my phone.

Sorry for saying this late, but thanks for accepting my challenge. GOOD LUCK