VIDEO- saying you wont do comics to improve your lines is a terrible conclusion to come away with. If anything you should be doing waaay more comics to battle this head on! The more you do something and the more you keep at it, the better you'll be! I actually had to do a double take to make sure this was actually you drawing as this comic, compared to your first is very different! Not to mention the story was very engaging and kept me turning pages. Don't let critique hamper your activity. Come at the next battle soon and swingin'!
SUGHA- Duuuude. I love your character, and the story you've been telling with hm so far, and want to battle you, but your half done battles or complete defaults are a real bummer :< I hope that B.B goes up soon!
Sorry to jump in like this. Because I like, have no dignity whatsoever since I defaulted but like.
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Line width again huh, Damn. I don't think i'll be doing another comic until I've made some real progress on that. Thanks, I've got a lot of things to work on.
Uh, no.
Keep doing comics, Drawings, butts, whatever. Don't feel intimidated what was said. Yes.
I ship it.
Also everyone else has covered the comic in the comments but I just wanted to say that this is definitely an improvement from your earlier comics. Good work!
Line width again huh, Damn. I don't think i'll be doing another comic until I've made some real progress on that. Thanks, I've got a lot of things to work on.
i have to re-iterate the issue with line width... it is killing your drawings....it looks like you are using both marker and digital for your linework(?)....and in a bit of a rush as well..work with smaller thinner pens or brush pens and work much much larger....and don't slop heavy lines over everything...especially in a rush
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Your line quality could still be way more expressive, and smoother. I dunno what you're using for inking, but even technical pens can create amazingly expressive lines, you just need to to be a little more hands on about it. Especially be careful with the line quality of distant objects. Right now you've got them with a pretty thick, uniform line, and it really kills the sense of space in your settings. Relax and get more delicate with that stuff.
I think you're definitely getting better at keeping your perspective consistent (watch width on your stuff though, remember to suggest the edge/thickness of eeeevveerryyythiiiing) but your city could be more interesting. In a lot of panels, it's little more than a collection of grey and/or coloured boxes. Decide on a personality for your setting before you draw it, imagine it like a sentence. You can even just base it on a real city, get some photo's, and play around mixing and matching various architectural and cultural cues.
I really like how you're drawing Lesdai in your comic, you really sell his personality with his facial expressions and posture alone. It's also way nice to see you trying out different rendering styles and more interesting shadow colours. Nice work dude!
Sugha -
Why won't my tears stop
Shen - haha, Ship only if you provide artwork. But yeah, perspective is my current hurdle. Sugha's time extension allowed me to figure out a way to make my fire look better. I'm glad you liked it.
Kent - Thanks. DAT PERSPECTIVE. I'm gonna nail it, just you watch. Also we need to team up again in the future, like before the year ends.
Sugha - I super happy you liked my side. I was all worried about that. also, I never draw characters with snouts so that was a bit confusing but I did what I could. Yeah, Perv fire, we all got some.
"I liked my side too much"?
I definetely regret saying that.
I am obviously biased, seeing as you gave my character a major role in May's developement. Makes me happy on the inside to see Joey making friends, and makes me laugh that I just make him fight with everyone somehow. I should probably try a different approach.
Imma agree with Kent here and says that I absolutely love your colors, and I really liked how you depicted Joey's way of detecting Lust.
Perv Fire.
Video - Great colors here, and I really see great strides in your lines and general composition. I enjoyed your depiction of the Dropkick District aka SexFurry Paradise. I also really like some of the angles you use, especially in scenes with Lesdai. I'm always excited to see what you come up with--looking forward to the next part of May Wu's story! :D
CAN I SHIP IT
TOO LATE I'M DOIN' IT
video your lines and colours are looking so great!! nice compositions and angle variety, though I can see that still trips you up some times with some slightly abstract perspective. I'm diggin' how you did the fire! Quality work dude!
Sugha you break my heart T.T I hope you do get to upload this later, and finished!
Aw, Sugha! I was looking forward to what was behind all that heavy breathing. I guess I can wait. I'll be upset if I never get to see. Hopefully whatever issues you're having go well for you. :D
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