I really love the world-building we get from just two pages. It'd be awesome to learn bits of info about the other princesses as the comics continue. I like the map, and Bullet Princess's overall design. Horses are hard to get right, but yours is lovely :) Can't wait for PPT!
very neat, it brings back fond memories of Valkyria Chronicles for me personally. In the bottom panel of page 1, Bullet Princess' eyes are a tad too close. In page 2, it looks like you're still struggling with people out of your usual gamut (in this case, the face of the older male), but I'm pretty confident you'll figure it out sooner than later. The horse in the background actually looks drawn better than Bullet Princess' horse, but it's commendable to be braving the dreaded horse to begin with anyway.
Excited to see the princesses in action~
PRINCESSES!
I'm actually kinda more interested by the other princesses in page one? Not sure if that's a good thing or not. But still, this is a totally fine comic, and Bullet princess is very interesting too,(I guess it's the part of mystery that makes me interested in the others) and I can't wait to see more. Although Beast Princess is very weird looking with her crazy pose, her disjointed arm and her inequal and huge legs and Calamity Princess as short arms.
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