pineapple pocky:
I love Wizzie's bright blue eyes, every single time. And earrings. But I've noticed that, in this pic especially, that the reflections on the pupil do not affect anything else in the environment.
This is an interesting thing for you to bring up, and thanks for taking your time to comment about it!
Wizzie's eyes don't really glow they lean to more luminescent. Her eyes glow in the dark more like the glow-in-the-dark stars you put on children's walls than a raver's glow stick, they appear bright in the dark but you could not use them as a light source to guide you way anywhere. Because of this, I haven't really managed to get around to doing much research on how much light they produce (other then knowing not a lot), so in the the scenes which have extra light sources - like the party scene with the string of lights - they over-power Wizzie's eye glow so they just appear bright but do not appear to produce any colour shine of their own off any object. In Vivian's house scene, where there is no light source in the hall I debated how much brightness Wizzie's eyes would give off in this light as no lightsource would be over-powering them this time. So I had a last minute decision to place some blue shine bounce off her own face.
TDLR; I'm still experimenting with Wizzie's eyes and how bright they are in different lights, but I really appreciate your input! and thanks for the tips :)
TINMAN: Thanks for the lovely comment! It's always great to hear from you, and I hope you find time for Void yourself soon enough :) !!
Always delightful to see Toro Joe skeezin it up. The lighting and colors are outstanding throughout. I think its an aspect you certainly excel at Hats. The sense that this is the after-after party- post 2AM when nothing good happens and last minute missed connections and poor decision hookups are being hastily cobbled together but in the VoidVerse. The flow of word balloons onto the thought bubble imagery seemed a backwards choice at first with the back and forth of words and images but I think the desire affect was achieved. I actually thought the white sun shaped lines indicating Wizzie's absentia intended she wanted to catch them in the act or Flip Block- which was indeed how it worked out. I like how Inter Species sex is not problem for the parties involved but a wee bit of coitus interruptus siphons the wind from Flips sails. Altogether short but sweetly hilarious, definitely a fine melding of skills and strong points- definite evolution of style Drastic. Always good to see Viv in action, holdin it down for Slaw. Between this and Mimi's recent BB its interesting to see where the battle lines are being drawn over the seemingly biggest issue of Void atm, as discussed in the Voidcast. Can't wait to see the plotthreads carried forth.
I love Wizzie's bright blue eyes, every single time. And earrings. But I've noticed that, in this pic especially, that the reflections on the pupil do not affect anything else in the environment. I imagine those pupils like a glowstick--however, even though it's vibrant, it still affects the lighting a few centimeters next to it. So even though I see a teeny shading here and there, it would be nice to hint a teeny bit of teal blue, or that the surrounding area of the eyes affect it a teeny more (although i see it in some pages). Also, another random thing is that because the light affecting the area is blue, the shadows should also be affected with a slight tone of blue as well (blue light=a little blue in the shadows too). It is also because this entire story takes place at night that it should be more obvious, even though the eye color is consistently bright.
Psycho Sean:
....Am I the only one who noticed Vivian has a picture of herself in her bedroom?
I'm sure that's not the only one too!
;o; Thanks everyone! We're really flattered you like the comic!
....Am I the only one who noticed Vivian has a picture of herself in her bedroom?
ego aside, i loved this, short and funny, nuff said since everyone else has explained the artwork being great!
Oh my gosh. Wizzie's words are exactly how I felt after reading that. I was expecting the story to go a little bit further, but it ended up being just a fun short little humorous piece. Basically, this was really top-notch stuff for both of you. It felt like a professional comic. That's really all I have to say. Thanks for the fun read!
Definitely a fantastic collab. I'd put it right up there with the likes of Angie and Fowlies Christmas Special! Everything from the environments to the way the color complimented them really shined. I love your linework Tox. You really know how tos et a scene and really accentuate environments with little details like the litter at the party or Viv/Flipwolfs clothes making a trail to the bedroom. Hats, your coloring really popped and strangely enough, I noticed it especially where Flip is pressing his hand on Viv's boob- you can really see that there is depth and softness with the way you applied light and shadow.
All in all, short and sweet little collab. Way to bring some sexually frustrated Christmas cheer to us. Poor Viv!
"Stuff my stocking" PFFT
Damn, it's good to see a fully completed comic on VOID. I have almost nothing bad to say about this. Other than I'm not sure If it's normal to be turned on by Vivian x Flipwolf...
I APOLOGIZE FOR NOTHING.
David and I decided to upload this as a Vivian BB instead of a collab for Viv and Wiz so it could get up quicker and Wizzie already has a tonne of BBs so whatevers. YAY COMICS
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