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Intro Story
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Mister Kent
All-Rounder
12 years ago
Johnny P vs. Johnny S would indeed be a sweet match-up! I enjoy the unique concept--it will be interesting to see more of Johnny's dino-infused world. Welcome to Void!
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Jetty Jay
All-Rounder
12 years ago
I have a Johnny Patch challenge in mind against you when I get a chance (and if you want to do it!). Love the really solid character designs you've drafted up for this, and a really strong setting with minimal props and environment. I feel like the very last panel of the last page is a little sparse and could have used some more flats, but I can understand that it would be tricky to balance that and letting Johnny & her dinos stand out. Well done, and welcome!
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Tofubeast
All-Rounder
12 years ago
Congrats on getting in! You've got a very solid first comic. Minor nitpicks: I think that the first panel of the second page where Johnny shoots the trinket out of the bandit's hand could have done with a sound effect to heighten the impact. Some other bits of action (Johnny's dino's tail smashing the other dino into the rock wall) could have been more emphasized or exaggerated a bit more to really pack that extra punch in. Aside from that, welcome to void!
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