Thank you! Your criticism is appreciated and I'll watch the car's and Nyasuu's size from now on more closely!

Nine colored AND shaded pages in a week is quite a feat, so major props for that! Your colors look really great to boot. I think your line work suffered for your color as the comic went on, but I can forgive it given the time restraints. Be careful of how you size things in relation to the world around them. On the first panel on page 1, Nyasuu’s car looks huge compared to the house. The same thing on the last panel of page 4; Nyasuu looks gigantic in her car. Anyway, good job overall, keep it up!

Yeah, I kinda figured that's what you were going for. I think you did a good job of finishing it off, all things considered. :)

Ahahahahahaha! Good work. I had absolutely no problem with this. Some may feel that there was no closure, but this is a tournament, not a single battle. You got plenty of time time wrap it up, if you keep up this pace.

It'll wrap up in the next round no worries. :D

Joolio! I loved your comic. Lots of people used Viv in their comics, but so far I've liked yours the best. So sassy and rude. Awesome. I can't believe how much you colored this. Ridiculous. My one critique is that there wasn't really a wrap-up to Boek vs. Nyasuu. I guess it makes sense to leave it as a cliffhanger unless you're actually going to destroy your opponent, but I felt like there could have been another page or two in there to show Nyasuu getting the upper hand somehow. The story started strong, but I would have liked to see more. Fortunately, I will in the next round! Can't wait!!!

Submitted!

Just a couple more days! Keep it up! Good luck!

I want you both to win! This better be adorable!

Awesome! I'm looking forward to this! Glad to see you both back in battle! :D