Tdk: Damn shame about your scanner, because what you have looks real nice. You’ve got some pretty sweet action scenes here and your inks are solid. My only gripe would be to have more backgrounds, they look awesome on page 3. Gregly: I liked your story, it was really cute and Gwen is an adorable smart ass. Watch your perspective and anatomy though. You pull it off well in most places, but sometimes your people and animals look a bit wonky. For example, War Beast on the first page doesn’t look level with the rest of the scene. Keep doing what you’re doing with your line work, it looks great!

tdk: shame about the scanner situation, but it actually looks good regardless. One gripe i had is the trollface gwen made. for your sake, please avoid internet memes in your comics. it took me a while to do that myself, but the writing is so much better when you dont use them. gregly: i enjoyed that you conveniently eliminated 8 racers at the end of your comic to make way for the next round. while its not apparent in this comic, i'd like to take this opportunity to critique the flatness of regi's waist and legs in your design sheet. you do a great job at establishing regi's shape and depth with simple shapes, but his waist is always a flat rectangle.

Way to go, guys!

TDK, it's a shame you didn't get to scan those, because those blurry pages look lke a real step up. Good job, guys!

Aww man I would have loved to see these both in color. Elle's vehicle has those reds and that would make them really stand out. Love both of your styles and good work :D

But there's no FedEx in this corner of the country D:

TDK, that's lame! You could always run over to FedEx and scan it in there... Either way, I can't wait to read it!

Uploaded. Sorry this looks like ass, but hey, camera phone. Because the scanner died on me you see

You can do this TDK! Keep it up! You, too, Gregly!

Goddamnit why is it so hard to write a race?!

Yay!

I'm expecting some really cool shit from both of you.

Well, how 'bout that.