woot, nice to see Girl back in action.

DUN DUN DUN!! I love your inkwork, so nice and shiny.. Overall just a solid effort with an interesting story and, as sloth said, something that makes me want to read more.

I'm really not sure why this doesn't have more comments! I really dig your style, and the story was just enough to dig its nails in and make me want to read more. Great stuff!

This was really good. I'm off to go read the rest of your stuff now!

I shall attempt to advance a plot.