I think you really nailed the pacing, I love the little squid flipping scene on the first page :) Can't wait to see the end!

The story is enjoyable so far, I'll be looking forward to see where this goes next.

Enjoying it so far!

Looking great man. Also, did I just get a shoutout or is the name just a coincidence? Haha

this is so precious ;A; It's hard to tell with the preview but as far as I can tell the pacing seems great and I love the character designs - especially the home city, it looks so different from Void city, it's fantastic. You know I love Leland very much. Also THAT NOSE.

Very cute. I love young Leland's big arse nose, which made him instantly recognizable. The cement pipes and the whole setup the kids were playing on was very well realized. As a preview, I'd say this was really successful, because I WANT MORE. Nice work!

I really dig the style for this. Nice work! I look forward to the rest.

I love the contrast between LeLand and young LeLand.

Hey, this is looking awesome! I can't wait to read the whole comic. The anthology is gonna rock. I loved the backgrounds in this, and the setup is nice and intriguing. I can't think of anything else to say, so I'll just say, good job!