@ Fern - I meant the tones, but that's all right. I like to know what everyone thinks and how I can do a better job. I just thought the tones would be fun to mess with. Plus I wanted to have a shot at doing something at least amusing.

Tatsura: @ Fern - How so? not sure which one you meant, so: screentones - I think sometimes they just look a bit overwhelming and make the picture look a bit muddly, especially if you are still using greyscale to color as well. story - I think yours was more comedy focused than previously (with some excepions, like Elle battle, but it was still funnier than the Elle battle, which is a good thing :)) and Kents was more serious than usual. I mean there still was comedy bits but I felt there was a much more serious general tone to this. I suppose it;s the amnesia and all that... Okay, I stop talking now ;)

Mister Kent - You're very welcome. I had a ball drawing Jane, especially in her nightlife dress. And don't worry, you did great justice to Swan, it was fun reading your portrayal of her. Hope to battle you again in the future!

Also, you make Jane's hair look amazing ;)

JoshuaEliGilley: I'd like to see what you do if you focus all that energy on 1 single comic!!! You'll find out quite soon--and hopefully it won't disappoint :D Tatsura, thank you so much for the battle. I love Swan, as a character as well as a beaituful ass-kicker to draw. I hope I did her justice! You certainly made Jane really awesome in your comic (and I love that you used her funky party clothes).

@ Fern - How so?

Tatsura, I think the screentones look fab although I have a feeling sometimes you overdo it a lil bit - like in void city park on page 3? I love how you both went on similar theme :P It also kinda felt like Kent's story was more like Tatsura's stories and vice versa - this is in no way constructive just an observation ;P all in all I liked both!

SOLID WORKS you two!! Sir Kent, you have a great flair for keeping the continuity going, and I liked the story here in itself. classic void team up girl on girl action! you sir are a beast! I'd like to see what you do if you focus all that energy on 1 single comic!!! really impressive consistency keeping Jane's story rolling along...I think all you really need is some more environments love and you got it all! Tatsura: I enjoyed the toning! just keep playing with it til you find what looks best, I thought they added a lot to the art. There are awesome tutorials on Toning in the forums, They look nice with your slick lines and sexy ladies, nice color too!! Story wasn't really my thing, but I bet this is how these characters would act IRL, so great job there. Only thing that was not up to standards was the exterior of the Orchid Haze, and a couple other environment spots where you just needed some more research about the structures, I.E. practice drawing photo-references or real life buildings, etc.. keep up the good work!

UPLOADED. I was screwing around with various screen-tones, so I apologize if it appears jarring. It's my first time using them, and personally, I'd love to continue using them for any future comics.

ROFL Now that I think of it, Swan looks almost like a French version of Jane.

bow-chicka-bow-wow

Hmmmm *re-writes script*

Whoa! Can I ask for a fight in the mud for these girls..?