Yay! 2 part stories and collaboration! TDK: It's really amazing how much you've improved since your start here. That being said, you've still got a lot of room to improve. your pacing and panels are getting better, but you should really look into getting an artist anatomy book or just find a website that hosts pictures of models. Spend one full day doing nothing but drawing super detailed anatomy and focusing on every small nuance you can observe. You will be amazed by how much you improve the next time you go to draw. The key to this is also muscle studies. Nachte: As always, I love the emotion you capture in your characters. The fat CEO sweating bullets is hillarious. my only criticism is that in page 6 panel 2 Elle looks a bit too muscular than she did for the rest of the comic. GREAT JOB, both of you!

What? Why has nobody taken time to comment on this battle yet? Tdk: I found some parts of your comic a bit too wordy for my liking, mainly when the newsreader was talking, Personally I’d break it up because for me it just goes “And now, our top story for tonight: after concerned citizens alerted police blbalblablablabla…” Your backgrounds are good and detailed without being too overwhelming and those are some badass helicopters. Nachte: Not much I’d feel comfortable to give criticism on your work, but I love your cityscapes and varied camera angles. The pacing is smooth and the panel layouts are awesome!

Uploaded. I HOPE Y'ALL LIKE WORDSWORDSWORDS :V

noice. Eager to see this battle!

Alright TDK! You just don't stop do you? :D