She's such a cute character! I can't wait to see more of her. You also have a charming colouring style that I'm fond of. However, in my opinion, I feel like the characters can get lost in the background because of similar colour schemes (I noticed this more in page 2) a little bit more defination in foreground and background would do the trick (perhaps in the lineart?) over all, lovely :)

michaelharris: I liked this. The fan love of void heroes is really fun. I was a bit confused because I read the whole thing and still have no idea who your character is. There are three girls in the piece and none of them are named. I wished you had finished the second two pages, because the first one looked pretty good. I encourage you to keep working on your anatomy and try some perspective. I did name the other girls, their names are in the dialogue, you already know which one is the main character by looking at the design sheet. But yeah thanks dude, I appreciate your comment. : )

I liked this. The fan love of void heroes is really fun. I was a bit confused because I read the whole thing and still have no idea who your character is. There are three girls in the piece and none of them are named. I wished you had finished the second two pages, because the first one looked pretty good. I encourage you to keep working on your anatomy and try some perspective.

nice!

Andre's got another fan :D

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS. Also the Luna VS Andre thing had me laughing because we all know the outcome of THAT match. BUT THEY HAVE FAITH IN LUNA, WHICH MADE ME HAPPY YAY.

Interesting premise so far with a nice set up. Feels very down to Earth as far as the tone and the set up with the HWT as a connecting event and backdrop along with the merch and fangirling. :D One or two complaints and it comes mostly from the image size. They worked well enough for the comic but so much that they make the art feel overwhelming at times such as the first panel at the television. It also shows off some of the rough pencil lines underneath the coloring though they seem solid enough for the job. Still, try to tighten up as you go. All in all I look forward to to see what you can do with your new character and where she goes. :)