Cool art as always Monday, looking good. Really enjoy the world you've created here, it is a cool concept, and I'm stoked to see what happens to the guy, and also what significance that first scene has. Page 5 really confused me because of the placement of text... at first I did not get that he was paid in chicken at all, it really had a confusing snowball effect...2nd read was much more satisfying as it finally sank in. Maybe it was just that the 1st panel on that page didn't extend down far enough to encompass the "Ducky Hunters, who will receive a grand total of 300 credits" text box. Glad to see new comics from you!!
My main complaint is that it doesnt have the colors you'd excpect for something called "rainbow arcade"
still, it's a pretty awesome idea of a dystopian future, it sounds both fun and terrifying at the same time!
Awesome dude, glad to see more comics from you again! Good luck!
And the disclaimer I am gonna post on each of these:
Remember people who read/vote , these are being split into two pieces. So this first round is just the first half of the comic and the next round will be the second half. So if the story is fragmented at all by anybody, that would be why.
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