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Revolution 9
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Uploaded April 28, 2011
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Fred
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15 years ago
Thanks guys! And thanks Frazzler for understanding the concepts and I'm sorry for your eyes... I could've considered reader comfort a bit more. I didnt want to put a limited palette on the page itself because that kind of decision is a part of style, but yeah, I guess could have toned it down overall.
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Frazzler
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15 years ago
Self-exploration pieces are always really cool. I don't think this was an exception. I like the concept behind the actual story for this.A character with a constant gateway into everyone else's minds struggling to understand and accept herself? Good stuff. I feel your shifting style throughout this was a really nice way to visually represent a sort of inner turmoil and confusion. And I'm going to assume you were going for a sort of psychedelic feel too, however I think those two aspects may have conflicted. I saw a lot of style changes and bright-ass colours that just assaulted me at times. Everything was busy. So very busy. I felt a little uncomfortable, which is nice reaction, but not if it might dissuade someone form continuing to read your comic. Some styles were cool but I wasn't so keen on the scribbly ones myself. Haha, not sure why. So yeah, I think I saw what you were shooting for, and I would just suggest not trying to go too mad, and maybe toning down the eye-bleeding colours in a piece like this. Maybe settling on some pallet to make pages seem coherent. Last tidbit: The panels where things were yellow and what everything was has it's name written on it in green, I liked that a lot. Helped enforce the questioning of identity. I like Lucy.
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PyrasTerran
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15 years ago
Great experimental piece. I'd love to get Arena or Gigara in on that in the future. Keep up the good work!
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Fred
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15 years ago
Why would want to understand anything when you can have... errr... MALKOVICH MALKOVICH!
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Fearn
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15 years ago
Oh, how I waited for this! I love how bizarre it is and just can't wait to see more, so that maybe I would be able to understand something ;) Second panel, page 8: MALKOVICH MALKOVICH MALKOVICH
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Darius Corry
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15 years ago
Just thankful for a Beyond Battle that WASN'T defaulted on for once.
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Ten Dead Kings
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15 years ago
Less is more. Wait, that's not what you're doing. Is it?
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PyrasTerran
Writer
15 years ago
You did far better than my ten bullshit. :) Can't wait to see it
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Fred
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15 years ago
Alright, pages and thumbs, ready to go. Number nine: Lucy comics Number nine: pages Number nine: panels per page Number nine: sentences per page Number nine: word per sentence Number nine: render styles Number nine: characters Number nine: background locations Number nine: number nines I like making my own life dificult for nothing...
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Dr.Salt
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15 years ago
.daed si luaP
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PyrasTerran
Writer
15 years ago
I prefer the unnumbered Revolution
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Fearn
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15 years ago
I'm excited
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Fred
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15 years ago
Number nine. Number nine. Number nine. Number nine. Number nine. Number nine. Number nine. Number nine. Number nine.
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