Beautifully rendered engaging attention to detail! somewhat intriguing story need more to really draw me in.

thanks Mr Kent more to come with Gypsy Moth vs. The Octavian. Thanks Kevin. Sound advice. Thanks anonymous.... Will be definately working on more concise stories, the will be manageable with the page count Bent one.. Gracias RTV.... I suddenly seem to be having trouble sizing my pages correctly... I'm not sure why...sucks.. Will work on balloon and caption placement for next battle.... I have some ideas about the black hoods, we'll skype sometime soon to chat about.... Hasta luego mi compadre.

That;s what i like about ya, captain Melendez. You BB your defaults. VERY nice lines you got there. Pages are a lil small though, but still sharp. I agree with Toast on text. Not sure if you stumbled upon our favourite problem: Not taking in account the dialogue and puzzling to make it fit while not covering the art. Left hanging and i wanna see more! Great set up. I like how yer the first to actually include other members. :D But i think it's gonna be just you, me and the frequency. lol Great stuff man.

The art was very well executed, but I didn't get a good idea of where the story was going.

Great line work and inking as well. You have some much detail in every panel, its wonderful.

I like the art, and the story is interesting, albeit confusing since this is only a small piece without a conclusion. My one suggestion for you would be to make all the text boxes free-floating instead of butting up against the edges of your panels.

Alberto I enjoy your line work - and also envy your city design :D Can't wait to read the rest.

GOD DAMN IT ROFLQU: Gypsy Moth in Gypsy Moth? That's deep. hahaha...wooooopppsss.... kinky though. btw the pages uploaded...i just had to resize them.

Gypsy Moth in Gypsy Moth? That's deep.

Thanks again Todd for the battle... Im still trying to develop as a artist... not the complete saga, but more to come... btw... the uploader said that my pages didn't upload... but the BB is here.... can someone let me know if the pages went through.