I liked it. Very funny and clever.

I laughed a bit. This is a likable character. Can't wait to see more.

The figures are rather narrow & stiff in a rigid, uncomfortable way. The part where your characters digging in his bookbag almost gave me the impression we were looking at his back & his neck was crank 180 degrees because his body's so stiff & rigid. Study some poses & work on fluidity & curvature, it would really help.

Falling through the street is NEVER the sign of a good day.

D20 OF EVIIIIIIIIIL!!!!!