The Bat side seemed cut short but the art was consistent & pretty good. Would've liked to have seen where it was heading but I liked what I saw & the interaction between the characters seemed pretty good. Ashley, the thing that really got to me about your comic was the amount of sheer text on each page. It massacred the pacing because almost every balloon felt like a mini novel. It's great that you're ambitious & have all this back story & these characters to introduce, but slogging us all down with it at once isn't really the way to go about it. Even on the case by case basis of the balloons. Instead of loading panels with paragraph after paragraph, go longer page count, & spread the sentences over at least more art to look at. Also, the line tool backgrounds were a little too simple & got boring. Your figures are ok, why not try just drawing your backgrounds too?

Ashely: You already know what I have to say about your comic, overall good job on your first battle! Neo: Aww cliffhanger! Super curious about what was gonna go down. Hope to see what you had sometime dude, looked like it was gonna be awesome.

SO PUMPED FOR THIS UUUURRRRRRHHHHHH

The time is near! Looking forward to this one.

Haha, now we have two of the coolest battles in the current drawing queue being released on the same day. Glorious.

Ooh, an extension? I hope that means you have something pretty epic in store, Neo 8D

i m lookin forward to Bat punching some one really really haRD

Good luck guys! Nice to see you jumping right into the action Ashley!

best of luck to you two!

A Jokester battle! I shall await this with impatient glee! Also, I'm expecting some good dialogue. GO FORTH AND WRITE!

Oh well this is just wonderful. :D

FIGHT! EXCITE! EXCITE FIGHT (BIKE)!

Awesome! Go get 'em!

Hey, glad you're back in the ring NeoIcarus. Good luck to your first fight, Ashley.

Sweet! Good luck you guys.