Wolcik: White space is killing this comics. I'm even asking for actual shading, but a grey plane on the floor or wall would do wonders. It's a BB so I'd expect more from visual side. It was a 'battle', which is why we had similar titles and deadlines. Not denying your critique, but it wasn't a bb.

You should practice a basic one point perspective, do a google, go to the void university.... Something. Sometimes you are on but most of the time you are Off! Good luck.

White space is killing this comics. I'm even asking for actual shading, but a grey plane on the floor or wall would do wonders. It's a BB so I'd expect more from visual side.

Well for all that are concerned, this week was not overly kind to me and I need some extra time to make this battle the best it can be. Thank you all! (EDIT) Well it is finally in. Hope everyone enjoys what is up. :)

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