Thanks for all the Kind words and crits guys, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Mister Kent I really like your take on ethos, i think if i would have done something different, or did a typical ethos comic, you would have beat me easily. I'm really interested in your next part, we should rematch again sometime. i think may continue with this darker arch of ethos' story. I wasn't sure if it would go over well, and i'm glad to see it did. thanks again for reading and for your comments, and thanks for the fight MisterKent!

Different tacts but both touch the same issue, both are well done. Pen,very nice succinct comic story, cool dialogue, nice emotive kick. MKent, Interested to see how the next part comes out

as for me I always enjoy scenes and a narrative stories, both works a good quality wise,

Good job guys, thanks for the great entertaining stories... Keep up the good work.

I'm a huge fan of what happened to Dr. Ethos. There's so much more you can do with this character now if you really put your mind to it.

Really great work you two, I was definitely entertained. Penryn88: I really loved the way you incorporated the fact that Flint's magic was still casted over you even after his death; definitely makes the story deeper. MisterKent: Jane Blonde's story was equally impressive and I am excited to read the upcoming continuation.

This was good, found myself really into each one. Penryn88: I've got to say I really like the shift in tone with this one. There is something so satisfying in watching an antagonist begin to spiral. Especially one who previously was so confident and full of ideas. I noticed that you handled figures really well here and in my opinion your selective use of blues worked in your favour. Also the Jane of you last panel, is awesome. MisterKent: I love how Ethos is the main influence of this. You've taken on board the character and from that you've effectively created the scenario, the scene, and the gadgets. Personally I think these little 'E' drones are the coolest. More than anything though, I just think it's nice to see Jane on the verge of a positive development. I really enjoy your style, just thought that perhaps figures in the distance were struggling, on page seven especially.

Great work guys! I enjoyed both quite thoroughly. I just noticed how uncanny a resemblance Ethos has with my character David and how similar their powers are. Hmmm... we should talk sometime... :D

the way you interpreted dr. ethos and jane was pretty good Penryn and i like the kinda dark spin you put on it. i like the story of yours as well mister kent and the style was pretty good as well

Haha thx guys, I like your story Mister Kent! i can't wait for the second part.

I love your style, Penryn! You draw a great Jane!

great battle you guys it was a good read

DOWN TO THE WIRE!! but i'm uploaded, can't wait for your side Mister Kent!

Cool.

Mister Kent you are a MAD man. Good luck Penryn.

Let's do it to it :D