Yeah the bgs were totally avoided and half assed all throughout, but the average person probably wouldn't notice. The colors were very vibrant and the whole piece was fun. That's about all I got to say.

Yeah, I like Paul Pope comics too. I think you're using the crop-to-a-tight-of-the-face-&-use-a-solid-accent-color-for-a-BG effect to the point of overkill. More backgrounds would help. Otherwise it was pretty nice

angieness: haha it looks like we're on the same wave length in terms of coloring lately. I would have liked if there had been a little more introduction since I was a little confused by what was initially going on. But I also get that the intent was probably just to do a flashy action comic so I can understand. yeup...just wanted to have rad-i-kill doing some fun stuff.

haha it looks like we're on the same wave length in terms of coloring lately. I would have liked if there had been a little more introduction since I was a little confused by what was initially going on. But I also get that the intent was probably just to do a flashy action comic so I can understand.

I love how you drew general misconduct. in fact, you did an awesome job drawing all these characters. The fight scenes were a little disorienting, but this is cool as fuck. so, yeah. high five.

Alusio: BWWWWAAHAHAHAHAHAHAH....I swear I didn't even notice that. hahaha. Several people said something to me too even before I submitted and I kept thinking "WHAT GUN ARE THESE PEOPLE TALKING ABOUT!!" yes. I will fix continuity from now on. Rtv: I'm totally down for a battle. And yeah...I draw like Paul Pope Ive learned to embrace it! ha. Alberto: Thanks yo...and you just might get to see some stuff from me on the shelves this year.

Great stuff, David. The thing I noticed is that you need to watch about continuity, as in the close quarters fight, GR blocks with an unarmed hand, and then this same hand is armed later, and the other one hits Haraha - We know he's been dual wielding the entire scene, but since you made it clear he doesnt have a gun in that hand by making it even pop from the panel, you either should have followed that in the next panels, or have drawn that gun. It's not a big issue, but it can be confusing, and since I got it, it made me re check the page, breaking the flow a bit for me, though you still delivered a freaking nice comic. Loving the colors too.

You make me wish my SDT fighter was alive. I like how you drew the swinging sticks! Cool fightscene. Page 5 and 7 reminds me of Paul Pope for some reason. i like the beginning and the ending short and sweet. New fighter? We should tango sometime!

Dude i love your shi*..... I'm so waiting for you to be working for The big leagues... pro stuff... big fan and keep rocking!

THis is some good stuff! Great graphic feel, but I'm wondering where that one gun went in page 8

So I was supposed to have battled Ghost Revolver a long time ago..but then a series of unfortunate events happened to Michaels PC and he lost his side. So I figured I had the thing finished I might as well submit it as a BB.... meh