that's really cool I like the story behind it. Nice job

really nice one Jamie, I think your character has one of the most developed story plots on Void. Your battles are always so interesting to read :3

hey, its pretty cool the way u draw characters.. and i liked your version of Jessie. a lil more detail in backgrounds mil make you comics even better. great job.

Good stuff, MoD. I loved the fuzzy drunk panel, lol. Keep up the good work. Hewhoisnot: I've been waiting a while to see Punk Rocker Girl again... and apparently I'll have to wait even longer. A shame too, I love thsoe arms :)

This is awesome... Story, character developement, and good fight motivation. It's got pretty much all it needs. The only thing I have to say that needs improvement has nothing to do with this comic in general, but something I noticed in your style. The space between the shoulders and the hips looks nearly boneless. Not much of a curve from the rips or any influence from the pelvis would be very obvious in a girl that skinny. I'm no perfect artist either, in fact I'm still trying to nail down exactly what I'm pointing out, but with the quality of everything else you have, this stands out to me. Maybe it's your style and I should shut up, but it's something I noticed anyway. Peace.

ok as always, thast so far to all that has said something, Artica thanks, and same goto to you silver. dingo i got your challenge ill talk to you on aim...go some fast sketchs of your char as well see if im doing it to your likeig before i accept. i hope the next fight goes well for me... and blindeyes thanks, im not really in a style or anything, to tell the truth i think that i am looking at real women too much and the one that are modleing and stuff dont have an ass..lol ya but thanks and ill try better in the future.... well keep the good thoughts going this way.... and same goes for the challenges.... lol thanks danger

sorry MOD, i tried i know you gave me extra time and everything but the 2 jobs is killing me... i'm probably gonna puss out on the dan fight too... I feel like such a deadbeat bum, but one job at 40hrs a week and the military... I'm only chinese, i'm not superman... so very sorry dude

i thought chinese were supermen? too bad for the time constraints I was hoping for more PRG action. MoD the progression of your ability makes me thirsty for more

Man of Danger. That was cool. Like the story and your definition of PRG Keep it up. Don't waste anymore challenges tho. THe outcomewas predictable before the fight.

I often put words in a wrong phrase that come off hosstile but normal to me. This is an unfixed problem and has to do with some mental shit with a long story. I can only 'imagine' the hard time you have but we both live in different worlds and should not discuss it anymore. Draw when you feel like it and even if it's shit we'd like to see it. Hard times can cause a guy to easily phrase shit different. Good luck.

youve been improving with every fight, good job. but i still think you need to work on some dynamic action. the one punch stood out to me as really stiff. but like i said, youve been working your way up.