My sentiments pretty much echo Roflqu's in this case. You rushed and your comic suffered. Lines aren't as buff as they need to be and the shading is looking rushed too. It's pretty obvious at this point that you really love using gradients, though your use of them in this instance I won't hold against you. This comic could really have been improved by the use of one more dark tone. My preference is black, but a darker grey could have really improved the sense of depth when it came to creases, wrinkles and even underbrush in the vegetation. The plants are really just blobs here, they could have used a little more love too. Tally ho, sandstorm, tally ho.
This was okay. I didn't think there was any reason you had to get this in 'RIGHT' now and really could have spent the time to tightening up the everything here. I think The Beast acting rational and not nuts is kind of a weird out of character thing, but I know what you're after here. I guess in wanting to do this sort of thing, you've succeeded on that merit, but next time, try to contain your excitement and use the rest of your time available to you.
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