I have no trouble admitting I'm a bit musically challenged. So I have a ton of respect for what you've tried to do here, not only with the lyrics but the art as well. I don't think it's quite as a nice as your first round entry,but it does have a deep story and I think I found it more enjoyable. It's a pity you couldn't hand it in in time, because things might have turned out differently if you had. Well, who's to say for certain? Chia Hui's rendition was probably my favorite here. For a week, you did great.

David, I'm glad that you enjoyed it, being a big Wu fan. I was afraid it might come across as cheesy. But I summoned my best white boy rhyming skills on this one, hahah! Def. will be making more comics with this style in the future. Thanks for the feedback. Thanks Wei, I wasn't tooo slackin like those other guys >:) Carlito, I'm just glad you liked it dude, tried to give a cool death since ur guy was kinda intertwined with Chia's story. I'll be fightin with oinko again some day so..we shall meet again in the arena for sure. JUST KICK SOME ASS THIS ROUND! Heather, you are too kind! :) Red, <3 THANK YOUUUU!

AHHHH you're just way too cool Josh.

Rad dude. I like.

Look forward to your future stuff too... and you owe me a battle!

That was sweet man. You deserved to win.

JoshuaEliGilley: O.K., that's what I thought, I was just pissed at myself for not getting it posted and wanted to show that I did finish. Thanks for the heads up Ang :3

good on you for posting this

good jesus googly moogly...man I'm kinda sad you didn't get to post this in the SDT it was sick yo. Wu-Tang = AmazingDavid's favorite group of all time...hahaha I actually turned on the CREAM instrumental and read the lyrics. I think you actually did a pretty good job of capturing each Wu members staccato...while still telling a story.... crazy skills man. Artwise this was great I think the cut paper look works kinda seems like a more expressive Samurai Jack. I would say some of the pages got kinda...hard to read like 8 and 11 were a bit like WTF is happening. but overall this is pretty impressive I hope you stick with this style and do some more comics even though MMMM is dead...

O.K., that's what I thought, I was just pissed at myself for not getting it posted and wanted to show that I did finish. Thanks for the heads up Ang :3

As usual, since this is for a comic that's currently being voted on, this will go up once voting is finished on the 2nd round of SDT.