Things I need to know! Thanks guys! I do plan on sticking around for a bit because I have ALOT to learn and I know it so bare with my stupidity XD

Sixtem, that first page is FUKKIN ACE. Nice detail. I'm loving the blacks, especially the panel with Sam standing at the bar. Cool pacing you got going on, like that grenade Cole drops as a surprise. Could've gone more extreme with the explosion though, like adding more debris, dust or shrapnel. A couple of black dots will suffice. It just stood out there's more detail on the impact of the bottle Sam throws at Cole. It was a fun ride seeing Cole toy around with Sam like that, but i'd love to know what happened to Cole. Extra points for Sam's slick and stylish landing . Zippy, I liked the friendly atmosphere you had going on. The inks looked razorsharp and squeeky clean, but their all the same width wich kinda makes stuff flat. 7 days isn't alot of time i know >_< Cute but brutal kill! Also looks like most of the effort went into the last page. Good work, welcome to Void.

6, solid most of the time but there were bits that didn't feel as loved. like the page after that nice round title page where the background was just line art without any spot blacks or tone or hatching even. pacing was pretty good though & the characters looked snazzy throughout. zippytear, the real gesture contoury line art with all the lines, the panels, the balloons & the text seemingly all having almost the same linewidth felt a little monotonous & sparse. kudos for tilting the camera around some though. a lot of people don't take the time to think to do that though, & while the perspective might've gotten a little shaky with that here & there, it was good to see the effort put forth. hope you stick around!

Six - That was a lot of fun to read because both characters were showcased wonderfully~ I don't have any real complaints except... how did Sam get out of that unscathed clothes and all? XD More please! Zippy - I'm sorry you didn't get the time to finish. But I'm glad you still submitted something! Your piece made me giggle! XD

Sixtem, this was a strong piece, with lots of attention to detail and good shading and story. I was excited to see such detailed buildings and it gave me the sense of 'Asian Urban Development' (i.e. Hong Kong) kinda feel. I just feel that some of the shadows could have been stronger on some of the buildings but this was great all around and the Toucan Sam thing was a nice touch. Sam is a definite contender and definitely seems like someone who could have been the legendary Warsaw's bodyguard. zippytear, stick around, I see the beginnings of something great, something to be molded and the potential for better.

Sixtem-glad to see you back, I hope you stick around this time since I've really enjoyed all your comics. I really liked how you drew Cole but I love all things adorable and fluffy. I thought the Toucan Sam thing was very creative and unexpected. I think my only suggestion would be for you to have more separation between your blacks. Like page 5 panels 3 and 4 kind of merge together and it took me a second to realize that that was two panels. Other than that you had a pretty good flow and some solid and easy to read action. zippytear-sucks you couldn't give this all your attention but life does happen. Cole is a very endearing character and I really liked the opening scene of him trying to hypnotize the dog. There's not too much I can comment on besides to spend more time on it and really tighten up your figures and backgrounds. Please stick around Void so we can see what you really have!

Crap, I keep forgetting about her robo arm! Zippy - I wish you could have finished! I got quite a few chuckles out of your comic. I hope you stick around on Void!

Make sure you stick around Zippy :D

Ahhh thanks six you make me feel so welcomed~ I found myself kinda sorta busy busy and things and I am really ashamed of my pages but be damned if I default >: [ Thank you so very much for the match six, I will remember and hold this dear for my entire stay on this site <33

Uploaded successfully! (or at least the server said so) Good luck Zippy, can't wait to see your first showing.

Reminder for all of you uploading tonight, please read this in the event your upload fails before coming to the mods http://entervoid.com/board/index.php?topic=10641.0

Ouh boy, ouh boy, ouh boy, thanks again for the info Angie! As for the other things I PROMISE NOTHING! You can't make me promise. Ass kickery? What? Don't YOU kick MY ass to hard(I need it to sit please).

Yay, I get to welcome somebody into Void. Don't kick my ass, please.

What Perca said haha!

hahaha go on Zippy make me proud! good luck you two. this sure willl be entertaining.

T_T I expect a tie >:I Or I'll cry. Damn you and your characters that I like >:IIII

http://entervoid.com/board/index.php?topic=11075.msg186023#msg186023 for the newcomer to read! Good luck guys!