Well, thank you all for the wonderful comments! I'll try to take all of your advice to heart.

Wow. That's all I can really say. This wowed me. I'm... speechless. I look forward to seeing more of that, Eighty-eight.

Nice work~ I liked the writing and storytelling here, and your colours are made of awesome. I agree with Seel on some of your lineart (not all, but some). I've been guilty of trying to hide bad lineart with good colour, but it rarely ever works out. You did a good job putting all of this together, though, and I can definately see the effort in it. :3 And Eighty-eight is a cute little dragon girl thing.

Oh jeeze!! This was really cool! I really enjoyed it (^_^ You have a really cool character here and I'm very excited to read more and find out more about her...! Really love your art, too, great coloring and camera angles in your panels! And I like your transitions, especially on page 5! Awesome! (and Larenth's shirt... hehehe)

holyshitholyshitholyshitholyshitholyshitholyshitholyshitholyshit Dude, this is friggen awesome to the max. I been dieing to see this for a looong time and now that its up, Im impressed :3 I really like the facial expressions that you do. Looks cute. We need to start talking about our joint-storyline thing we had in mind during that one conversation we had.

A very nice tale, well drawn and with feeling.

Seel: I admit my linework was a bit rushed in quite a few places, (even though I took forever to finish this bb) once I decided that I wanted it up by the time Larathen and Mize's fight went up I had a week and a half to finish it. Plus, you might be able to tell that I inked most of the pages in 300-400 pixels per inch, but page 4 I inked in 600 pixels per inch, and it nearly *killed* my computer for trying.

wow, that was awesome! i'm really lovin' this character. and now i'm looking forward to your fight with Sol even more. your colouring is really amazing. i woulda given you an A for quality, but your line work isn't really up to par with the colours. when i read a colour comic and it blows me away, i always picture how it'd look with just the line art and no colour.....with yours, it loses a lot (for me, this is just an opinion), i've seen some amazing line art from you before, just....transfer it over to your comics. with that little thing boosted, you could slaughter all of void.

Yeah, the last big panel is a reference to James vs. Agent Black, and it says so in teeny-tiny text at the bottom of it. I didn't want the text to distract from the panel as a whole, and I hoped folks would recognize the explosion without it. First large explosion I've ever drawn come to think of it.

I guess it was... I was going to ask too XD A btw, good job! The bgs are nice and I also luved the way u drew Larathen! It really amazed me oo. I dun like to sound repeating and such, but I'm also liking the way 88 is turning on void. Keep up, and I hope be abble to fight u someday (when I get my char in >:C)

Excelent Battle; was the last page a reference to James vs Agent Black?

I like the way 88's turning out. She's putting a lot on her plate for twelve years old...

This was great! I love 88's expressions. :3 She's turning out to be really interesting. I can't wait to see her developments in the future!

I concur. Your work is very nice. I appreciate the fact that all of your pages are coloured and finished. Your effort definately shows. Great job ;)

Thank you Zombi! I learned a lot of stuff about backgrounds during the process of drawing this.

This was a good entry the script, was good. nice varying angles keep it up!