Very interesting. Brilliantly engaging panels.

page number 7 is mind blowing jj. Like seriously hardcore. I've already told you how much infinite love I have for this!

thank you for your time reading and commenting and critting again guys, I really really appreciate it. I'm glad you guys enjoyed reading it. about grammar- yess I need to improve on that. thanks again! also thanks kure for sticking with me even though I constantly annoy the hell out of you, haw haw haw. keep the crits coming, I'll severely need it. :)

Definately sexy.

Beautiful. Like the others, I'm amazed at the coloring and angles that you did. Fantastic. The only crit that I'd offer is that you might have someone double check your grammar before finalizing it. There are a few mistakes... but other than that... amazing!~

Great angles, great dialogue, great story! I just love it^^

YES! you added the bit where he shoots the furry in the face XD

beautiful work... just got home from my job, and i find this jem... ahh. i can relax now. thanx.

8D oh god...that was the best thing ever......can't wait for part 3!

Hot damn. That was amazing. There are so many positive things about this comic I could comment on, but I'll stick with what caught my eye first. The angles and lighting effects are damn near perfect here, and really help to set the mood. This new coloring style of yours is great. You should definitely stick with it. Also, the dialogue...you and Kure are my new favorite people now. You guys should team up more often.

thanks for taking your time to read and comments, peoples :) I'm honored.

brutal. . .i NEED to see part 3

Beautiful! The colouring turned out great!

<3

Wow

This is very amazing. And Chip comes off looking like a complete bad-ass.

That was fucking awesome, IM sure you should know, that you just pulled me out of my artist block. thank you. 0 _0