kure your new style is freaking amazing, I love how you played with expressions, especially Dan's, since I think you rarely draw that type of face before. Aaaawesome! :D

Great BB! Glad to see Kure finally got his mask back. He looks cooler than ever now!

Yay! Got my Kure fix! Very cool, though I think you should work on a few of your panels a little bit. It gets a little confusing toward the middle, but otherwise, so cool ^_^

What Wei said, I love where you're headed and excited to see what happens when you get there. Really enjoyed the majority of this, though certain parts were tough to decipher exactly what was occuring. I'm as big a fan as ever man, keep it up.

So hot.

sooner or later you are gonna get the hang of this style and then you will be a force to be reckoned with.....I'm gonna suggest you really look at layout and design of each panel and page.....like Mignola does..... your line work is getting better and your blacks as always are excellent....the brown is coming along....you just need to learn yerself on putting them all together in a more harmonious fashion

XD I like it, we get to see Doome in action and I gotta say I like the way Kure looks more now than I did before. As far as critique goes, I like your stuff, but sometimes I do find the panels a little bit confusing. Not the layout, but the art. Maybe it's the shading? In this case panel 3 of page three I had to reread a little to figure out what was going on. I'm still not completely sure of what I'm looking at.. XD Maybe I'm just missing something obvious.