I don't even know how to vote on this.
Galvo your story was awesome, but your art ranged from excellent to downright crap. I don't even know how I'm going to rate quality for that.
Pi you've still got some anatomy issues, for example on page four Pye's arms are different lengths... otherwise you were doing alright artwise and it was cool to see some color from you. I do want to see how this ends though.
Thanks everybody. Yeah, there was definitely a lot more planned, but I just didn't have the time to finish everything that I wanted. So, I decided that if I was gonna turn something in, it was gonna be the best I could do art-wise, even if it meant cutting the story short. It's good to know that everyone liked it, and I'm really glad for the appreciation and support. I'll be sure to finish it up as a BB when I can, maybe after I get killed in the SDT. :)
Dude, Gabo, that was amazing. It looks like you tried out some new things in your art, which is always a good thing for people, and the story was just so awesome I couldn't help grinning like an idiot the whole time I was reading. I can't wait to see what happens next.
@ Galvo - That was a damn fine read, for sure. I was sooo disappointed to get to the end and have to come back to reality where there are no such thing as GodOpods. Dammit!!! Someone has to get to making them, for realz.
@ Pi - Nice effort, just needed more follow through.
Great job you two.
JV
aw man, pi... you fuckin pulled out the stops there!! BUT WHAT HAPPENED??
oh well, i wanna see what happens next ASAP!!
i'm really suprised at yer effort man, i appreciate it!!
and shit you had me LOL'ing here.
That was fookin brilliant Galvo, I want Godopods available for purchase ASAP. At least the Mechanicpod. Enjoyed the hell outta that. I see this becoming the official past time of Void City.
Pi, you really had that story building, the sudden ending was heart breaking. Hope to see what happens soon. A definite step forward in your art dude.
Galvo that fuck'n rock dude i gave you all a's yeah im glad ill get to see more of that game in your next fight
pi like evey one else said art improving dissapointing end
Galv, that was extremely entertaining my friend. Like Seel, I didn't want it to end, you got me hooked!
Pi, good effort...I agree that it was a disappointing end. Your art IS getting better so don't get discouraged...some more time and practice and you should be carving a nice little niche for yourself. Keep at it!
gabes gots to be one of the most creative fight to date... my vote goes to gabe
but pi your fight was looking good but then you killed it with a continue... but very clean most imrpved fight from you to date keep it up.
Galvo, that was one of the best fights I've ever read. I mean, damn. It was like an episode of Yu-gi-oh, but not crap. I totally need to plug in my high-five drive so I can e-five you.
Pi, artwise, that was your best fight. It's a shame it was cut off so suddenly. It would've been pretty good.
Most unwanted... what the fuck?
Galvo: Storywise, you've got my vote dude, but artwise, I've seen a hell of a lot better from ya man (Then again, I think you have mentioned that you've been wanting to take time on future comics on DA or something). But, this was still entertaining nonetheless, and most unwanted huh? I officially need to fight ya soon. ;)
Pi: You gave me a few chuckles, but why didn't you finish up yo!? Artwise this was looking to be one of your better fights, but I would of loved to see a finished fight from ya dude!
Gabo booty quakes his way into my foul heart again. Keep it up you two!
galvo: okay, that was amazing. VERY entertaining! the whole idea was just great. i'm not much into super long fights, but your was so interesting, by the end i was sad that it was over XD you're fight was just amazing (aaahhh, i wanta seelopod) <3 can't wait to see your fight against hiemie! >;D
pi: man, it was good at first, was really building up to something that i was interested in, and suddenly dropped of with a crappy \"to be continued\". very dissapointing :< it'd be nice to see it finished maybe as a BB, coz i really wanna know what happens.
without a doubt, my votes go to galvo.
It came from the onomolious interworkings of my torrmented, defeated, and subsided-subconcious, as I read the posts of jeaslousy flowing from the teaming emotional pores of fellow art bretherin as we converse on this site to create and share sequential art creations on what is know as \"Void\"...
I made it up, just like the phrase above...no book...matter of fact...I hate poetry....:x
Pi you have sealed your fate among the many acursed and doomed souls that plauge our society for endless days and nights until they conside to their fate with the one we call \"death\"...
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