w00t, w00t, you uploaded it...! :D The story kinda alright for me... seems like a "warm" welcome for Hanon, ehehe... xD; Artwise, you can still improve... and I find the action scenes pretty cool... ;D AND GUNS... at least you can draw better guns than me, LOL, good one... xD; Hope you get better in the future fights... I really find Stranger so cool... :D

Whenever you got time, dive into anatomy studies, muscles, bones, poses, everything. After you get the general idea of the body, go for the portrait, learn about how the muscles of the face interact with each other in order to produce various facial expressions and also give you better profile shots (these are really the hardest). Aside from that, perspective, if you get the chance, pickup Hogarth's book for his chapter on Placing the figure in space, How to draw the marvel way has a small and simple chapter on that as well. But knowing these will help you make more convicting poses and relationships of characters with background so you dont have characters floating in spaces or going against perspective itself. Oh and also, storywise, overpowering a character makes a boring story. Its like a one-sided fight between a wild bear and a baby. 3 seconds - Game over, no tension, no struggle- DONE. Buuuut, if that baby unleashed a HADOUUUUKEN right in that bear's face then an epic battle started, well, ud at least get the audience's attention to know what else is gonna happen. Good luck.

Not bad, but looking at this comic I can't help but think that you're giving the Stranger a bit more power than he needs. A conflict can be interesting if both opponents seem to have an edge over one another, but don't drag it out of course. The story here... well it's not bad but it's a bit too one sided for my tastes as I mentioned. Art here is pretty good, but in all honesty you could of done better, the shading for one should not be bleeding outside of your characters like that, it's messy dude. Also, you may want to consider changing the linewidths in the future, things that are far away will have less details on them, basic rule of thumb there that'll keep your comics looking nice. I'll leave the rest for somebody else, but this isn't bad, just keep practicing.