molotov, short & to the point but the art has a nice rough edge to it. wish it was a bit more substantial though. other than the really nice line work, there wasn't a lot going for it. betito, this to me, felt like your strongest yet. varying up your palette a little more would have really helped push the colors. a couple of times the anatomy didn't feel consistent on your characters. but you're getting there & it's looking nice. -J

lantern good arnt i like the style you use my only problem is at points its hard to tell whats going on i think you should do some coloring so the reader can get a bvetter picture of what exactly is going on in the comic sable i like that you color it its nice coloring and somewhat good story i didnt like some of your character anatomy and work on motion of the characters make it look like they are doing somthing then just posing so you should really work on your sequentals but over all you both did ok :-D

Angieness: Very thanks for yours advices! =D I think I had a lot of mistakes in my comic.. I need keep working hard on this =)

Molotov-your work is lovely as always, these were some great and strong pencils. Just it's a huge shame you weren't able to do much more for this fight since I had a hard time getting into it because it felt as though there was no purpose or direction story wise. It sucked that the ending quickly cut off but I did like what you had. Betito-This looked pretty nice but I felt like your colors were a little more muddy than previously. It may help to expand your color palette a little more since it feels like you rely on a lot of pastels in the backgrounds so the characters easily blend into the backgrounds. It also looks like you did these on larger paper and had problems putting them together once scanned. In the future try to be a little more careful with your scanning or try to work smaller. Now story wise you had me until Latem showed up, then it lost the flow it felt like. Like why was Latem randomly there, why did she attack him out of nowhere and proceed to be buddy buddy with him afterwards? These are all things to consider when doing a story. I can totally understand that it can be hard to find a reason for two characters to interact in Void since we can't give them all a big story purpose because we're always moving onto the next opponent, but it's something to consider in the future. Just try not to jump around so much I guess. Other than that both of these were pretty strong and I enjoyed them

Caravaggio: ehm.. thanks ( I think, I don´t know if I translated well your comment ñ_ñ" ) Molotov: Thanks! ^^ This was hard! I like your version of sable and yours draws are really greatest =O Dragon-dan: Thanks, next: Sable VS Stranger, or not? =) Soulless Sanctuary: Aww, you are very friendly! ^^ jeje. Very thanks for your comment and advices.. Paint with watercolors took a long time but I like it =) I have battles pendent but I would love to battle with you soon! =D

It was a good fight... :] Molotov: I really like your style here... I'm not sure if it's really pencils you are going for, but if you were, you could have cleaned it up a bit with PhotoShop... I suggest playing around with the levels, since they can really handle up the blacks and the whites... :D Storywise, it was short, but okay, for me... :) betito: You never fail to impress with me with your coloring... :O I would suggest to fix up the anatomy a little more, and you'll be alright. ^_^ I'm actually impressed with the story... I would only suggest proof-reading before submitting... :3 Again, good battle... Betito, we should really battle soon... >]

good fight both of you, especially your colours betito, very consistent.

hey beto, thats pretty kick ass... you added the viking god of metal! I´m screwed for being fucking lazy... (in spanish for betito) hiciste un gran trabajo, aprecio el gran esfuerzo! :D

"And... Now you hug me?"...? Shit, I've been doing it wrong. Either way, extra points for that line.

Uploaded! =) Espero no tener muchos errores de gramática.. Ya quiero ver su comic Molotov!.. El mío lo tenía listo desde antes de ayer pero me faltaba la traducción...

I think that is just the default date for characters that were created before the site was rebuilt a few years ago (I know GVSR and some other characters have the same date).

freaking uploaded... and I just noticed this "created may 30, 2005" Latem´s been around since september 03 O_o...

OH SHI- LATEM! i love it when vets fight. you get to see how much they've improved.......NO PRESSURE!

Good luck to the both of ya...! Make it good, ya hear...? :D

good luck~ :D

OMGZ, BIG BIG WAY! I love you.

King_Pong: HO HO HO. Latem? NO WAI. yes way! angieness: Good luck you guys! Great to have you back Molotov! well thx I wanted to do a battle for awhile I got some free time to do so :D

HO HO HO. Latem? NO WAI.

Gracias Dure!! ( que lindo es escribir comentarios en español ) no te descepcionaré! :3 Thanks Angie!

Good luck you guys! Great to have you back Molotov!

Vamooo betito! tu puedes :3

Hi :3 Thanks for challenge me Molotov! Good luck!