well, R, i actually forgot what i had initially planned to say in the boxes, so i had to come up with something else in the last day, also you have to fit text in boxes so its tricky. I liked what i was trying to say there but i dont know if it was overall a good analogy. Dawg, hmmm i always thought radios was sort of buff, but i may have been mistaken, about the blueline pro, for some reason i like it there, i dunno why. Some dislike it though soo i dunno Jack, i actually wanted to have use this form for nine because i was trying to draw similarities between the two charachters, one at the begining of his ride, one a little further down the road, but still in someways similar, was trying to play with the visual similarities, then also show the differences, but so far as this part as it is, doesnt come across that well. Im actually planning to finish this one off, i got some things i want to say in this arc overall, tie up some ends and what not, but then again ....the best laid plans. Sooo there might be a BB continuation in the future, maybe not Car, yeah the window spacing thing is tricky but its also relative to the windows, then the spacing inside, its all rather crazy Perca where you been at! anyhow thanks for checkin it out, like i said im a try to tie this one up a little more ( in theory)

i dug it phys... you had strong lines as always and told a decent story with yur half.. i like the use of Jah... only part that sorta lost me was the narration at the beginning.. wasnt sure where you were goin with it.. but all in all was ill.. sorta reminicent of francis manupal work.. hopefully yur next venture back wont be met with a default

I didn't have a problem telling them apart, but I think radios was too buff and looked a little older. Maybe that's why people couldn't tell them apart? Radios is supposed to be all skinny and shits. It looks nice though. And reads pretty well too. You should maybe erase the blueline pro stuff next time. It's not really a big deal, it's a bit distracting though. Anyways. Good job man.

Phys it was definately a mistake to use ND's second form for this, because you just didn't differentiate between him and Radios by anything more than a few stray dredlocks. You should have just taken one for the team and used the form that wouldn't make your story totally illegible, if only because you had the option of doing so. Jesus Michaelharris way wrong reason to go throwing the card around.

I got what was happening but I do have to agree there could have been something to differate the two. I think it wasn't just the way that they were drawn but both seem to have been given very similar personalities, especially in facial expressions. Considering it's only half a comic the art carried my enjoyment of it quite a bit (despite a building or two not having enough room for utilities between floors). But then, I'm probably the last person who should complain about unfinished work. And of the bewbs, well, adult or not I can't bring myself to complain about that.

dang another default battle by Physic nice aweseome work I just love yer inking!!!! my I envy it! very awesome aotomy too!

Hum I was not going to comment since it came kinda obvious for me but seen form the other comments, i think it would be a good idea to share. First of, I had no problems reading this, got all that was happening in the first read. I'm not trying to asspat or anything but come on... I dunno if that's just me, but I use to read black and white comics slowly, paying attention in all the details. I saw the facial and hair difference + the women and scenario are different too. i got that the first page was mean to show events happening at the same time and how both characters got the same reaction. I liked the pacing, it's very similar to the stuff I'm used to read so it was an easy ride and also awesome to see your more fished pages. I must hail for the scenarios and also the body language. I think I'll be punched, but I don't think you've got the same face syndrome. I can tell the characters so easy... whatever. All in all I liked this a lot, it was over my expectations, really. Keep it up, just try to finish the plot on next comics, since all your battles stay open and it's kinda hard to follow a story on that line. I have no complains but that last one. Rock it. More. Fight more!

uhhh guess my story was really confusing michaeharrisl, cause thats not what i was going for. far as radios and nine days looking the same, ehhh i specifically drew some differences, but maybe they didnt show up well. similarities: both tall black men with dreads, sort of similar build. differences, facially nine days has a rounder nose, smaller eyes (narrowish) rounder nose, strong jaw but rounder face. nine days hair is also usually pulled back. also nine days is probably a little darker than radios, but nno colors so thats irrelevant. Radios has bigger eyes, and a more defined jaw, his nose is a little more european, his dreads are also more unruly. How well i executed what i percieved to be the major differences, well, if yall think they look the same probably not well. Since my drawing didnt tell the story very well ill run it down In two different places two different people are \"fucking around\" just passing the time, as radios is starting he is interupted by a ghost, as nine days is finishing he is interupted by an old lady witch (these things are roughly happening at the same time) The lecherous witch lady has come to nine to ask him to train radios, who has yet to master his abilities. Nine doesnt care, but apparently his old friend Jah basil who he has been searching for is apparently there. he jumps out the window and races to baron mansion Jah(ghost) is apparently trying to get radios to carry on his unfullfilled destiny, however Radios is busy trying to ignore the interuption Nine days isnt impressed with radios, (probably somewhat offended) and pops crap, radios is inadverdently clowned by his woman and loses his temper. far as stereotypes, void people fight alot, most every real person has sex, and radios baron as a charachter uses nigga a lot. Wasnt my intention to present any stereotypes here. having to explain all this means my pages missed a lot sooo i ll keep that in mind

It was kind of unnecessary and confusing to show the Baron Mansion in the beginning, it would have been better to show it when there was some action happening. The whole beginning speech didn't really make sense and really turned me off to the story. The characters look the same. I couldn't tell until the end of the story that they were different, they were also having sex with the same girl. It was also one giant \"inside joke\" well not joke but it was really really written for people who know the back story. It also seemed like one giant black people stereotype. Like all we do is fuck, fight, and say nigga all the time. I think that can be incorporated in a comic, but there was pretty much nothing else understandable in the story. The art is fantastic. I would try to incorporate more detail in the backgrounds they all kind of looked like technical drawings, ie all outlines. Good work on perspective and characters though.

oh yeah also some history you may not know Jah basil is the main reason nine days is in void, he is an old friend who was last seen in a death match with monty chomps, so it is basically a call to his purpose when it seemed lost (monty chomps is dead), hence why jah basil being there is a big deal for nine days.

i had an idea for a starting point in the story, based on some things, so i went with that. Its not really about shock value or anything. Was more of a concept to represent the charachters focus. as far as cussing, from what i know of radios thats the type diction he usually uses. i wouldnt say there was an immense amount of cursing really. As far as drawing charachters looking like thier ethnicity, i have to go by the model of the charachters, Radios is actually half italian half black, i have to interpolate orenkies style to a more realistic one, so i have to make some choices. Nine days has a specific look im going for, maybe you dont know people who look like him. I do though I think some of the depth in the story was lost due to me not scripting it when inspiration hits, but after i have drawn the whole thing and whatnot. Also i was experimenting with drawing two narratives at once which is a bit tricky. Still what it comes down to is that is most of what happened in the story is just what you said, the meat of the story would come after, this is where it starts. 3-5 pages was all i could fit in for this I dont know if the execution of the script was perfect though, it may have been confusing. especially with two similar appearing charachters without most of their costumes for most of the story, it may have been too ambitious

Physic you draw extremely well. I think some things to work on is drawing people to look like their ethnicity and to have little more variety in your faces. For all I could tell all the guys in this comic were the same white guy with different hair dos. You draw anatomy pretty well and you have excellent hands (something everybody struggles with) and your inking is great nice and clean and inventive in places. I would stress that you work on story telling however. I don't really know what's going on other than the one dude with the dreads is fucking chicks...and so other dude has to train another guy...and if that's all that is going on then I think you need more depth. And I was a bit put off by the plot and the dialogue. I'm not a prude by any stretch of the word I just don't see how the cussing and the sex drove the storyline to be anything other than a display of \"look I can make people cuss and fuck in a comic\". When I was 10 pretty pictures were enough for me to enjoy a comic, not anymore. I think if you're looking for longevity to your work learn to tell a good story.

physic> The inks were sweet but I didn't get all of it. I didn't understand much actually except him fucking all the women he could. Really sweet still, you'll get good quality and entertainment because the pictures actually did entertain me. Orenkie> STOP DEFAULTING!

rated R For sexual content explicit language read at your own risk

phys has requested an extension so the deadline has been extended by 1 week.

been a while since weve seen sometin from nine days good luck you two!

yo, Orenkie, you never hit me back after our match. what happened. i really didn't want my first match to be a defult. now i have to work for my money....mwahahahah and by the way stay tuned to my upcoming match with rtv, becouse your in it weather you like it or not sonny-boy.

heh welllll we ll see what i can show, but ill try to make it interesting

Good luck you guys! Please no default this time Orenkie ;_;

good to see you back in the game physic, show them ( and myself ) how its supposed to be done!