Kinda late to the party there, boyo.
but the Corny comic made me cack. (that's the singular of cackle.)
loved the art style and layout and diverse angles of powerz too
imagine getting 53 votes on a regular ol' battle
oh man I wish I coulda voted for these!
Corny, it's nice that it was complete and coloured and all that fun stuff, buut nothing stood out and made it supergreat. I think you could spend more time refining your drawings or something. no doubt you've gotten better but you can keep on going with it.
Powerzzz yours was super swell! I'm jealous of them inks, and your drawings are really nice and clean cut. it was a cute fun little adventure, and I liked the characterization and all that fun stuff. you woulda had my vote dude.
Both were really funny and fun to read. I liked the art style of powerz more and i got a delayed laugh from the ending once i realised what was happening. So he gets my vote. But both were still great.
I enjoyed them both guys (though for different reasons)! So my penny to each~
Powerz: I liked the expressions (especially Marlin's smirk), how it was an easy read and not difficult to understand. The amount of detail you put into your backgrounds made me go \"oooh\" and the last page made me do a double take. LoL The only thing that vaguely got me was the three panels on the bottom of page two. It's a weird choice of cropping(?) compared to your other panels.
Corny: I really loved the vibrancy of your style, it really adds to the story. And the anthropomorphism of the tail!!! I haven't decided yet whether or not I like the whole \"nightmare\" idea for the plot, but I definitely enjoyed the resulting \"OMFG!!\" reactions from Marlin. The weird line art of Hugo-Pinn is throwing me off in the last last panel. Anyways, I hope you still want to fight me Corny!
Loving the ending Powerz, very funny.
I liked both but Hugo has to be the one, sorry corny. I liked it but Powerz had more charm to his plot for me, I wanted to actually see what Marlin was capable of.
Powerz - This was very good execution on your end. Mostly on the characterisation of a fighter I haven't met. Not to mention that your stark b/w are always a TREAT to look at. Everything here's sown tight and I find no problems with it. Theres not much else to say for lack of narrative but it doesn't hurt your scores either! Do MORE WORK IN THIS STYLE ! I can only see it getting better .
Corny - Also a well sown up comic. But perhaps I was expecting something more from Marlin - perhaps even a different feel from the art style ?
I suppose now I have to question if the two comics are somewhat related since this one points out a relationship with hugo even though I have no idea how they've met. In this sense, the narrative isn't so well contained. But despite all that, the body language, the bath tub habitat, and his current living situation with pin is pretty freakin funny.
Both were relatively short, but are interesting within their story lines.
Corny, interesting start with the comic as well with the hilarious twists. Although keep in mind etails are as important as z' story line itself.
Powerz, nicely done with the starting o' the story line. I would liked to see Hugo to become more involved within your story line.
Overall well done guys.
Great comics both of you.
Powers- Awesome backgrounds. You have improved your skills greatly. I love the pacing and I think the story (although short) was still a great read. :) and like Angie said already, it would have been funny to see Hugo notice his wallet was gone. Like maybe in the strip club.
Corny= I've been a big fan of yours for a while now, it's nice to see you grow not only as an artist, but a story teller as well. I loved this story, and the punch line had me laughing long after I stopped reading the comic. Keepup the good work.
Powers- Awesome backgrounds. You have improved your skills greatly. I love the pacing and I think the story (although short) was still a great read. :)
powerz: the story is short and sweet, a little lacking just a bit but I like it pretty much. good job. art wise, fuck you and your buildings!!!
corny: it was funny, though i feel I probably wouldn't laugh as much if I don't know who are you referencing to on the costumes and stuff. i still wish sometimes you add more substance to your comics but I'm not sure how to say it without sounding like a pompos jerk so just keep it up
Powerz-this was a pretty big upgrade for you! Storywise it's fine that it was short and sweet, but I do wish that Hugo would have at least noticed his wallet had gotten taken. Like perhaps fast forward to show him going to use his wallet later or something. Doesn't have to necessarily result in a fight or anything, but at least to show Hugo as more than a background character. Artistically almost everything was pretty solid aside from page 3. While it looks like you got the perspective down pretty good, everything else looks pretty rushed in that panel. I think it also would have helped to black out the buildings in the large panel on page 4 so they don't look unfinished but so they also don't overpower the detail in the foreground. Other than that pretty good battle
Corny-woman, I'm going to bother you about rushing through your battles until the day you die. I know you finished at least a week early and you could have devoted that time to refining some things and giving more love to the coloring and backgrounds. Color wise I want to see you start showing there's a light source so the colors don't look so blotchy. Now entertainment wise you really shined here, I thought the story was hilarious and I liked little details like Marlin's shoujo outfits changing several times.
Very funny entries from both of you, punchlines both rocked.
Powerz - Nice to have you back, you've gotten much better since we've last seen you. The story was a little plain to me, I would have liked to see more interaction between the two. Still, it felt like you really nailed Marlin. And I mean that.
Corny - You're definitely hitting your stride here in Void, and it's been awesome to see you develop your style since you've been here. You've still got some tightening up to do (who doesn't?), so don't forget to practice basics with your time off. I really like way things are going for you, so keep it up!
powz - sometimes a lack of story is the best story. I thought this was really rad.
corny - it was pretty funny and all, but I've seen that bit so many times.
Very cute shorts, you two.
Corny, it was adorably cute though I was rather confused at first. But it made me laugh, which is good. The art wasn't as tight as other battles, and I'd like to see you work on your hands a bit more. Again, cute work.
Pow: Holy upgrades, batman. o0 Your backgrounds and linework did like... a massive leap up from what I remember last seeing from you. This really impressed me. True, not much happened... no big moments or conflicts, but I really enjoyed it. It was like a nibble of something really good that has me wanting to go look for the whole meal. If I saw this little short somewhere, I'd go looking to see if a full comic or more work was done, and that is good. It was memorable. I'd have wanted to see more Hugo, too... but it was just really cute.
Pow got my vote in the end, though Corny's entertainment score trumped his.
Excellent battle T vT
powerz, I think I would have preferred to see more of Hugo.. he seemed more like a secondary character, like he could have easily been replaced by someone else... but maybe you wanted it that way; I didn't mark you down for that specifically..
It did seemed like the story was missing something, though. The comic felt more like a chapter than a self-contained story. I think it's cause there was no conflict?
I love how you handled Marlin, though, and your backgrounds are amazing, especially the very first panel * -*
Corny, this was almost perfect; I love that you can cram such a cute, funny story into four tasty pages.
only problems I had were art stuff. I think you overkilled shading in the bedroom pages. Especially on page four, where I think the third panel with Pinn's face could have had more of an impact with perhaps some bright, dramatic lighting?
Powerz amazing backgrounds and facial expressions
i would have loved to see maybe some green or blue tones on it to create more depth
but it did not really matter.I really loved the background and the atmosphere you build
good work
Corny looks good and a funny story.i found the colors a bit random at times like highlights where a bit too strong
you should take more time this functions but the artwork could be better.But the story makes up for what it lacks in
drawings
amazing work both of you good and funny short reads
Simple and Sweet, It's hard to choose between them!
PowerZ, DOH, this would've ROCKED with your colors, but your smooth inking makes up for it somehow. Your perspective and backgrounds were awesome. Your story lacked a lot, and I think that will be your ownly downfall against Cornz here. Please continue to battle, we rarely get to see your work.
Corny, I laughed at the end of this! Very entertaining! It seems like you rushed your battle just slightly and has a bit of a downgrade from your other recent works. lol! You're such a silly little girl though. So young, SO talented.
Good job you two!
youre both silly for these....
Pow digglez: your art is lookin nuts man... youve really grown. youll be an inspirado to the newbies for a reason...
Corn dawg: you are the weirdest little girl on the planet.. and i appreciate you fully.... i love that marlins girl outfit changes in each panel... oddly hilarious... and hugo is the center of my gay nightmares as well ;P
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