welp two hours left. All the feedbacks I have been negative so far after the posting.

Mercenarybdu you need to chill out. You've made 15 comments on this site and almost all of them have absolutely nothing to do with the actual battles kura is participating in. Keep the chitchat to aim, private messages or yourself.

Kura please pick up my messages or I assume you are officially dead like everyone else.

well, both of you could have done better... but no biggie. this was more of a set up of things to come... >:3 and woot! the second time i get to see kale outside of a battle i'm in. heh great work col!

Thx for crits Phil, and Coral has her own reasons to help Veronica, and she doesn't see Veronica as a savior too only Victoria, and YEH Coral knows she's selling firearms and stuff, but she's giving Veronica a chance to change all that, that's why Coral's saying at the end: \"for purposes of good\",. Coral will know if veronica tries to do something really bad >:|she's always alert.....but yeh we'll see what this leads to, and yeah quite honestly, my battle is not entertaining at all, i was more focued on storyline, but hell.....I'll try do much better on my next battle

Both are a pretty good read, but it wasn't very entertaining honestly. Col: Art-wise you're still awesome but you do need to work on necks and such a bit more mang. Story-wise I'm still not liking the idea of Veronica being this savior of man mainly because of how Kura portrays her character she's quite the villainous character (selling firearms to both the VCPD and fur anarchists just isn't the stuff a savior is made out of ya know?). Overall though you had the better story despite my opinions on fighters. Keep going dude. Kura: I honestly like veronica more than cue, but artistically you've still got the same problems. The anime inspired characters just need to go bud, and you seriously need some facial studies because eyes do not belong on your forehead, nor are they that big. Also your inking style is still the same faded mess it is with tons of negative space in every page. I know you can do better artistically but you're still doing the same thing you've done when you joined this site. Entertainment and creativity were OK for me. Vote goes to coral on this one.

If ya think that you can't do two weekers then you might as well keep saying \"there's nothing more grim than death and taxes\" outloud and in your head infinate times to get things done next time Kura.

GODDAMMIT BDU WHY DID YOU STRETCH THIS COMMENTS BOX'S WOMANHOOD !?!?!?

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DONE....with 6 minutes to spare. i need to stop thinking i can do two weekers >_>

There, uploaded my battle, and people, don't expect anything extreme....since my battle is boring :O and there are some pages I'm not really happy with, and there's ALOT of mistakes I DID which i'll keep in mind on my next battle. I could have done this much better. Anyway, kura, i can't wait to see yours.

....and if you wait too long, I might as well make your comment board longer than _______ ....oh wait i can't say it here....

Kura get movin, I'm getting a very sharp headache from caffenie withdrawals waiting.

Goodluck guys! I can't wait to see what you come up with! :D

urk

WHAT IS THIS SHIT

coraaaaaaaaaaaaaaalllllllllllll omg yesssssssssssss *cough heh srry about tha excitement overload

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Woot, minimum 7 pages :3

O.O wow. this is going to be awesome! go kura!!! have fun you two!

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