THANKS GUYS, ALL COMMENTS ARE CRITS ARE VERY MUCH WELCOMED and I'll improve next time!!!!! shada, I already told you, it was omfgfgfg sweet, I love it!!! next time I will make a better battle, YOU'LL SEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I have no provocative critiques, but only retarded comment. Oh god yes please them comiz were SO GOOD. I loved both, but I must say, I liked Jho's better, since it made me chuckle a lot more like an old man than Shada's. Shada's was adorable, but I love the sense of humor presented in Jho's better, and her sketchy, yet clean style always saves the day. Good job, you two. I want to see more.

oh shada: Love your style, the way you draw characters is great! Al must say though that I was confused by a lot of your storytelling. There were some panels that I really couldn't tell what was going on, so maybe that's something to think about next time. The story itself was good though! (Gotta hate those damn giant squid!) :D JinguJ: Also love your style, and your lettering is great too. Your page layouts are really easy to read, and flow well. Your blacks are also well spotted, this helps balance the panels, and make more more easily readable. The story was also great, some wonderful character development going on! My god.. the end was awesome. XD

SHADAS loved the watery colors and stuff, gah, so funny. Must do battle some time. OH JHO your junk had me grinning cheekily, your so stinkin' funny and you arts tickles my eyes, yes.

Holy shit, Jho. ahahaha That last page had me in stitches. So, so wrong. And oh shada, that was so cute. c:

U both made it full of awesome for a one week battle.... dunno if the critics will be fair for the time you 2 had to spend on the comics, but at last they can be usefull for longer deadlines, right? oh shada: I always dig your lines and the way you can draw other's characters in your style, but one thing that sometimes get my eyes all confused is the ammount of small panels around the page.... I like the idea of a more splashed paneling style, but you need to be more carefull with those.. Found a bit difficult to follow tthe panels order in some parts, but nothing that reading the comic twice was not able to clarify my mind :D. Another thing is watch out for \"lightning\" effects and such... the use of colors on those made me a bit confused.. maybe you should give a try foor also the shape of effects, more than the use of colors. For the story, simple and neat. I enjoyed reading yours a lot. And sorry for being pick >_< JinguJ: you.. and... your... expressions! ha ha ha arg Jing I curse you for your talent. Ok, lets start: use of pastel colors was very nice, the paneling and story were great. Just one thing that bothered me was the lineweights.. but as I said before, one week battle is not enought time to picking on those right? Just that the balance between weak and stronger lines would had given the story a more dept look, but I dunno, maybe I'm jsut being pick.. sorry. Another thing... just try using less \"action>delay>reaction\" panelings...sometimes they're nice and needed, but sometimes they're a waste of panels in the page and grab the attention of the reader for a thing that is not \"that\" important... well again, sorry for being pick uu. The shots form diferent angles made me all happy and also gave a good flow for the comic. congratz <3

shada's good. the story's sumwhat fluffy in some... undescriable way? but ive to vote for jho. methinks hers' more dynamic and entertaining. LOL! wanna see jj in fishnet lolololol (ullo there jho. finally decided to join void lololol)

hahahahaaaaaaa i love you jho :( next time we will battle more hardcore

I'm still laughing, lol! I liked both stories, really, even though JinguJ's were totally surprising. Totally impressive stuff, as everybody said, for 1 week

Impressive for just one weeks worth. Awesome jyorb <3

ahhh that was so good from both of you! i really like the panelling in both of these, good job! this is an ACE of a 1 week battle, i'm really impressed! i'm going to have to give it to jho though, because her story played out a little more interestingly haha. i seriously thought she was going to be a hooker too hahahaha! also the end where she runs away is just too funny with the expressions! it kind of simplified art-wise towards the end, but understandably with the time you had to draw this. Esquellio's nephew is like some cute little bug hahaha! glad to see both of you and your characters battling again :3

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Whoa, where did all those fights came from @_@

OH SHIT WHAT ? ?

I WON'T DEFAULT I PROMISE I know I've said that before, but I really-really mean it this time!!!!

A one-week battle...j.j. is coming back like she means it! Better watch your back, Shada! For serious, I expect some awesomeness out of this battle. You've both got some great complementary styles, so I am definitely looking forward to it.

;_____; I am.. I'm.. You've made me a real woman now.

remind me to never act on impulse while drinking shada, please dont default OK OK OK? OK!

I look forward to reading this!

My prayers have been answered. :'D *tear of joy*

whooooaaaaaaaa what?

;_; yes oh god yes. *weep*

Yes

Yaaaay, Esquellio! Yaaaay, j.j! Surprise battles frome nowhere! Hope you guys do well. It promises to be quite entertaining. ^_^

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