Hiemie, the pie to the face on page four was the best. This isn't your best work quality wise, but then again you only spent one week on this, so you did a good job with the time provided. Pi, sorry you didn't finish your comic. There's not much to say about the art, but I got a couple laughs out of the story.

Okay, I got the pages in. I don't really have an excuse, but here's the basic run down. I needed to move back 400 miles to LA, and lost the better part of the last two days without a computer or internet access, so I didn't really get a chance to finish. I know I should have been working on it earlier, but this is what I got and I'm glad to have gotten it it. I apologize to Hiemie, because he deserves better than this, but I'll have a more finished version of this on the forums later. Thanks for understanding, I hope I can still get a lot of good critiques from you guys in terms of lines, layout, writing, and everything else I've got there.

that was hilarious XD grate comic

Pi i wish you got had you comic in but i bet i was good. Hiemie nice colors i really liked the color. the way to colored your comicwas great good job. funny man funny

WHUT WHUT??

Zombie fish.

WHAT THE FUCK HEIMIE D:<

Oh hellz yeah!

rocksauce

>:I This Is Gonna ROCK. to the X-TREME. Two of my favorite fighters goin' at it!

*EXTREME GLEE*

Why the sigh, Pi?

UH OH

*sigh* fine.