Thanks a bunch Kuma, means a lot to me, haha, I'll be working hard on my next fight.

Man! Such an even comic! This is going to be tough (*3* I liked both of your stories, Orenki you had some nice action scenes. Craqued I liked your varying camera angles, they kept things moving. You guys both have nice lines, but they could be nicer! (cleaner) One thing that bugged me about both of your comics was they are both visually confusing. You both have some nice line quality and variation, so push that even further!! and...try to use more black! Also need... better...font.. (*_*;; It um.. bad/mismatching fonts+wordbubbles are just distracting and detract from the comic as a whole (you guys have heard this probably! get ye over to blambots, for they art delicious lifesavers!) Yea, I suck at giving crits, listen to Njhin! Keep up the comics!!!!! >8U

Nhjin, I am definitely taking your advice to heart, quality above quantity. My next fight I'm focusing on quality. Thank you! Eep, don't make me beg for critique people.

D, C-, D+ Orenkie - I'm sorry dude, but I had to stop at the BJ scene. Serious anatomy work and drawing skills are needed. I admire the effort, but focus on improving. I don't believe that this is the best you can do. 4 weeks to do 3 pages. I'd rather see 3 tight ones than 10 weak ones any day. Not feelin' dude's hair at all. C-, C-, D+ Craqued - Similar to Orenkie, but you have slightly better drawing skills and a better understanding of page flow and layout. And just like above, if the page limit is 3, at the very least do 3 pages the best you can do before doing more.

HAHA sorry Q Oh DUDE DUDE that was so SO funny especially all of Radios butt whoopin' comments AND THE UNICORN MAN IS EVEN DOUBLY AWESOME when you draw him. I was dying, haha. Really love your style too especially on girl, they come out really cool for some reason. AS FOR ME I feel bad I couldn't give the same attention to all my pages, I really wanted to do a good fight scene BUT then while I was doing it I was like...just not having fun with it. I was ticked at the style, the medium, the LAYOUT everything, it sucked, SO I APOLOGIZE but I did learn a lot of stuff from it so thanks thanks for the awesome fight!

Hahaha Craque yo battle was fresh mang! from what I hear we both have improvements to make, but yours makes sense enough to me. I love how your story moved. Flows good. I know you had some complication so its all koolie, I still enjoyed it.

I think that's the most confused I've ever been

Go fix what needs to be fixed while you still can. i know i wanted to fix some shit on my battle. But i got 4 pages too many that can't be merged without being a huge ass file. Go fix it!

bout 3(of the other 4 get up'd some how.) of my pages is missin dialogue :'( couldah did em right quick, but i was tryna figure out how to merge my pages and i couldnt get it to do like i wanted in PS. the last pages is supposed to have to be continued(again if it gets up'd) it'll be the beginning of my upcomin battle vs Rtv. I feel real good bout this one, it makes me laugh so, haha i guess thas a good sign. I hope yall enjoy it.

the battle will be on and when it's on i will check it out i hope is a good battle....

Its koolie, lol mine will be up a lil later today. Got a few finishin touches to slap on it.

Daaang it. Dude, I hope I don't disappoint you to bad. Sickyness and many trips places totally brought my quality down oh oh oh. Half of my pages I had to do on windy roads, on ferry's and in parks and beaches which were hella windy. I even soaked half my pages in a pool AGAHGAGAH but anyway, can't wait to see what you got.

Good luck gents!!!!!

Craq, you better craq out something that craqs me up like last time. Oren, get yo black ass in gear and stop distracting me on AIM like I do to you... does that even make any sence..? Good luck!

Ohshi-- !!

Holy moley.

oh oh O here we gooooo. HAHAH

Oh yes! Id eat this with green eggs and ham, Craqued I am!