Item: Angela Rudell vs RedBlood Phill
Rating: 4.02
Author: Angie

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19 years ago

Angie, a definate improvement. I've been anxious to see the whole battle ever since you showed those previews. And the detail is excellent. Especially on that wall with the screens. Extra points to you! Phil, I'm dissapointed. You could have pushed your pages a lot further, especially since you only had three. Angie's half gave an excellent build up and then...your ending was rather anticlimactic.

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Rone Rivendale

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19 years ago

Angie: I was very impressed with your side of things. It was long and thought out. The artwork is top notch. The ending was pretty good, it wasn't the typical one on one battle you see in 95% of the battles here. You are really good at telling a story and that brings me to.... Phil: I was dissapointed that pages were missing however even if they weren't I don't like your art style quite as much. Perhaps your storytelling might have been just as good but since I haven't seen the rest of it I can't judge you on that. Honestly I'm not sure why this battle is as close as it is. Not a personal knock on you either Phil, just weird that an incomplete comic is so close to a complete well thought out comic like Angie's. I do like how the two of you put your comics together the way you did. You were really trying to tell a story that continued from each other and if all the pages had fallen in the right places it would have been really nice. Congrats to the both of you for giving Void depth.

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19 years ago

WOW WOW WOW. This was so much fun to read! Kudos to both of you for not being afraid to tackle big, scary backgrounds. :D Everything there is to say has been said already, but I'll say them again anyway. ANGIE: The \"Panel from Hell\" completely blew me away. Not only was it drawn well, it was a very awesomely and interestingly designed building. The only thing that wasn't as smooth as the rest was the panel transitions with the fight scene, you kind of lost me there, but still, my vote goes to you. PHILL: The backgrounds are a HUGE improvement from the last battle - as in, I can tell it from the foreground. I've got no real complaints about your artwork, the only thing keeping me from rating it as high as Angie's is that it's not all colored like hers is. The unfinished-ness actually doesn't bother me all that much, because I found the awkward pause you ended at to be an interesting ending note, and it kind of works for me. Overall, this was just plain awesome all around! :D

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Angie

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19 years ago

Thanks for the crits guys! I totally agree, my fight scenes need a lot of work and were one of the things that bothered me

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19 years ago

Angie: I loved the whole thing =3 Your linework and coloring is getting better! My fav panels were you favourite panel of hell, hehe, and the last panel on page 7. You ned to work more on your action scenes, they look static and lack some flow. Overall a great job! Phill: you linework is really good, but mot of the time My brain was a bit dizzy due too many things going on on each panel. And well... 3 pages... hope you can finish this thing up in a BB or something =3

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19 years ago

Phillllllllllll! D: You disapoited me. Where's the rest of the comic? how did it end? T_T

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Chimaeric

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19 years ago

Angie's fight scenes are too 2 dimensional. Phil.... you only did 3 pages.

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19 years ago

Angie: Ow Angie. Ow. Your originality is making me dizzy. Your simple, thick-lined style is BOOOOOOSS. Your panels were very well done. I felt they could use a tad more detail like that nice LOVELY shot of the buildings. More of that please. That would be awesome. I like Angie's 'tude too, I get a different feel for her character, its a somewhat used character build but you made it different. I DIG. Pheel: Your style, with your amazing detail and cartoony proportions, it's FUN. SO FUN to read. I feel you could use more line width though, a lot of it looks kind of flat. Thicken up them lines. I love Phil's feet, too. There very big. And claw-y. Their...their nice. Post them other pages later sir, it would be lovely to see.

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Angie

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19 years ago

Phill's aren't going up, he submitted a few more pages 5 days after the deadline hehe so yeah that's unfortunately all that will be going up

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19 years ago

missing pages huh ? perhaps I'll hold off voting for a while. anyways Angie, this was one of Void's better battles I've seen in a while. I'll give a full crit once I rack my brains around this as well >_6 d

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19 years ago

i'm too tired to leave a decent comment right now, i'll leave a nice big crit in the next day or two for the both of you. one question...and this goes to whoever uploads the pages (wei? toast?) why weren't phill's other pages uploaded? i know he had a lot more done for this that he said he had submitted.

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19 years ago

Angie, your comic is good. Everything about it is good. Keep it up with the story, I can't wait for it. Phill, I'm a little disappointed with your comic, but it's a good follow-up to Angie's comic nonetheless.

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19 years ago

Nice work Angie, you can really tell that you put your all into developing the story and the art is up to scratch. It definetely makes me want to see what happens next. Phill, i've seen all your other pages and the whole thing is a major step up from previous battles, well done and keep up the hard work! Great battle guys, got me outta my lurker shell and posting a comment on the battles!

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19 years ago

looks interesting... anyways...I'm new so I'm kind of confused here...can you hand in stuff late even when it says \"Past Due\"? looking forward to this battle anyhow!

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19 years ago

I won't say anything, just watch, I swear! XD

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19 years ago

PHIL IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO DEAD! xD

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Spanex

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19 years ago

He'd better be fast D= only 9 more hours to go

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Angie

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19 years ago

My half is done and turned in phew! The past two months have been crazy so I'm glad I was able to finish. Still waiting on the snail Phill to finish hehe

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rabbitrabbit

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19 years ago

I LOVE YOU BOTH. Who to root for? I shall root for... ...Final Fantasy 6. :B

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Blackkrystal

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19 years ago

I CANNOT CHOOOOOOOSE D: I'll havta root for both of ya.

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Spanex

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19 years ago

Kitties on the lose! D= Good luck to the both of you

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19 years ago

aye...but Final Fantasy 6 is hard to resist.... i know i couldn't resist it.

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Phill

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19 years ago

I'm working on this, I swear!

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Angie

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19 years ago

I hope you're working on the battle and not playing Final Fantasy 6 Phill, you don't want to know what horrible things I will do to you if you don't finish this. I don't want an easy victory because you slacked off ^_~

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Dingo

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19 years ago

cat sex hahaha that was hilarious. now shut up.

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Angie

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19 years ago

I'll be sure to insert a random hardcore porn cat sex scene just for you

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Sperium

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19 years ago

*singing*Cat Sex! Cat Sex! Yay for Cat Sex!

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Mess1ah

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19 years ago

Mess1ah is monitoring this match, good luck both of you.

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Jackster

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19 years ago

I want a good clean Cat Fight! No balls of yawn, litter boxes, or even bags of catnip are allowed in this battle. NOW LET'S GET IT ON!

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spinzoa

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19 years ago

MAKE THIS HAPPEN! Go, go, Angie!

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Angie

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19 years ago

I so saw that coming 4am haha

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19 years ago

Cat Sex

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Bronson

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19 years ago

Don't worry, this time I'll vote just for you Angie

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Dingo

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19 years ago

rtv! D8< you're gunna get your ass beat...so...bad... angie vs phill. FINALLY! i've been waiting for this fight for a while. can't wait to see it......you both better do you BEST XD i kinda feel bad choosing sides, but in all honesty i think angie's got this one. phill, you better prove me wrong.

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19 years ago

Will Kal aMari keep making annoying posts? Tune in next time to find out.

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Rtv!

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19 years ago

\"Bah, since when has height mattered to anything? \" - Mamoru is referring to a height comparrison sheet angie drew recently on DA, it's pretty cool. And i must say, this is a rather cute match up, it's pretty fun seeing the Exiles beat the shit out of eachother these days. ..and i still want your baby Angie...while Seel is still at her moms, don't tell her though.

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Kal aMari

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19 years ago

Bah, since when has height mattered to anything? 'Sides, we haven't seen all of Angie's powers yet. ...Go go gadget beast mode! Just what the hell did them masked midgets DO to Angie? Will she leave us hanging? Am I gonna get shot for asking too many questions? Tune in next time, folks!

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