Lockjaw, sorry but, I didn't see a lot of effort here. But I did see boobies. So, yeah, big ups for boobies. Ancelin, I really didn't like the airbrushed coloring, but hey, your comic was ultra easy to read. Spatious, clear, and colorful. That made it much more fun for a quick read. Kudos.

Lockjaw, short, funny ending, but a little expected. Ancelin, that was a freakin' riot, laughs on every page, that was one of the funnier battles I've read in a while, if I could have given you an 'A+' for entertainment, I would have... But I can't, you'll just have to settle for an 'A' and a lovely fruit basket with your choice of seasonal delights.

Haha, that lightsource thing is dead on. I realized about halfway through page 5 that I had forgotten to take that into consideration. It will definitely be a focus for me in the future. And, eh, tekkieman *cough*, I blame most of that on Ancelin having a more complicated design than the other two, but mostly I just haven't drawn enough male characters lol. Thanks for the advice. Also, if you plan to battle me in less than two years' time, you have to get a char in immediately :\\

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bobo - not bad. good quality, and the story was pretty interesting. can't wait to see more fights from you :3 red - uuhhh.....your style reminds me a lot of kim possible 8[ at least, when you draw girls. it was a cute short story, but i think everyone else already said what to improve on.

hahahah the lockjaw part was very short and ilarious at the same time... funny. and Ancelin's was incredible.. i like the way you turn around a history after i think i know what just gonna happen.

Bobski, you're definitely getting much better--but start taking your time on the other people man! Ancelin almost always looked great, but Lockjaw and the other guys seemed to lack the detail Ancelin had. You could have added stuff to them, even if their design sheet didn't call for it--like muscle tone :P If I evar get around to making a fighter, be ready; I shall be teh pwnage. --Dono

Heh, I see Jelly-Jam got drank again. That's not going to end well for anyone involved. Bobo: your fight was great. Good quality and it was fun to read. I can't think of anything really negative about it. Red2z: not very good. The quality seemed extremely poor and the writing seemed dull. I'd suggest adding more detail and using more background elements and perspective in the future.

Bobo-loved the fight, was extremely entertaining, you did a great job on the facial expressions. The coloring was nice but I think it would have been a lot better if the light source was just a little more clear. red2z-I understand this time around you had problems time wise, but showing what you had was better than nothing. I think it would have been interesting to show how on earth he talks or makes out with that big lock on his face.

I didn't feel guilty.

My votes go to Bobo quality-wise....but Red's entry made me laugh...even though I felt really, really guilty about it afterwards. haha Cute fight, you two.

bobo......I lol'd quite a few times. there for I'm biast and my votes go to you >:]

i lost too much time on school and work so i apologize now for the comic and can only promise better for next time, but i wanted to upload what i had instead of nothing

I wanna eat my mathbook....

Page one is almost complete. Yes, powerz, I am definitely outshining any of my past work with this one. This is gonna rock!

...my morals are worried about this...but what does that thing know? MAKES THIS GOOD YOU TWO!

I am so happy right now.

Thanks for accepting; this is gonna be sweet!