Poor vomiting monster in the bathroom...

Basu- Your pages look so different then your intro- perhaps these were a bit rushed? I suggest next time you fill in all that negitive space with backgrounds- I can barely tell where the characters are in your pages. I expected more from your first fight- but good job either way, Sweety. Shada- pretty unique style you got there. your pages actually look like water color paper, which is cool! I really think there could have been more story to it though. Both of these submissions are just drunkin \"comedy\" to me. I mean this with no rudeness intended, but- you both could have done A LOT better on your first fights. Good luck to the both of you and I'm glad to see no defaults.

Shada-I like the unique style you got going there. You managed to be crazy yet still make sense which is always good. Little torn on how I feel about the fonts though, in some areas I got a little confused. Basu-You started out extremely strong and the story is very nice through and through. But like what others have said before me, I hate to see how it sort of died down towards. the end. The story was fun enough to make me still be able to enjoy it even though it wasn't as finished as it could have been.

Cute battle you guys, those were fun to read. Oh Shada: Totally did awesome. Like everyone else said, your style is sweeet, and so fun. Boney is kickin' I love him. Simply lovely. Basu-zo: Funny comic though a bit rushed looking. You kinda didn't live up to your intro, but that's cool anyway, I see you were busy. K'den, ono comics, guys <3

SHADA: Very amusing stuff there. One thing I didn't exactly like was the pink boxes with white text; the white text was pretty hard to discern. Besides that, your panels flowed, and the conclusion made me rather laugh. I'll be keeping my eye on your boney ass. BASU: I've gotta say that I was a little disappointed with how yours turned out, considering that you had three weeks to work it. Your line-art's pretty good, but if you're going to do colors, you might want to color everything: that's like giving us just half the can of coffee. You'll probably do better next time and most likely in time management (I presume that was the issue), as I expect more from your work; I took a look at some of your sketches and previous work, and know you can serve more than shown in this battle. And on originality, I had to mark down a little: this was quite Crazy Samuari vs GRiFFIN. :/ Likewise, on quality, you could have improved your score by tidying up the text and text bubbles. That's all, but keep your lineart quality; that's pretty solid-gold-teeth quality there.

Shada: Nice stuff. I have to agree with amentia. You have that same sort of feel that hiemie creates where it is nicely controlled chaos that looks good on paper. Also, very funny and creative story. Keep up being cool. Basu: Sorry you couldn't finish. I would have liked to see more.

Shada: Dude, I don't know what it is about your style, but I really, really like it. It's sketchy and polished at the same time, if that makes any sense at all. I thought your story was cute and the ending actually made me laugh. Bonehead is definitely on my hit-list now. Basu: Cute comic, but a tad rushed near the end. Your coloring makes your linework much more exciting, so it's unfortunate that you didn't have time to finish the last two pages. Otherwise, a nice, strong first entry. :) Great job you two.

I think both of you guys did a great job :) shada: I love Bonehead XD I think he's so cute and I like your comic style quite a bit. Basu: Basu~~~ I liked your comic too. It was very fun to read :)

NO! NOOO! I'll do better next time, I promise. ;(( ps @ basu: OMGLOLWTFBBQ. I enjoyed that. He IS the sex. <3

oh shada: Loved this comic, all the pages were coloured, and it was very entertaining (i put A) i hope to see more Basu-zo: This comic was gret, but not all pages were coloured (kudos to crappy happenings) and like shada's comic, i gave it a A for entertainment, as well, because it was funny. very, funny

*read shada's entry*......im so boned -_-;

DONE!..ugh..sorta. what an event filled week (useually not so), I was displaced from my room/studio coz my folks demanded my wall be fixed( tis jsut some large chunks of paint out of it) and my first comic was ruined, my bro spilt cola on it -_-;, anyway, Now my friend want me to come to sydney with then so Ive gotta post what I got coz I havent a clue when i'll be back. first page has a quick CG job, 2nd a tone job and 3rd is up to the point of lineart~ all text added. Im surprised the week was so eventful, least I posted soemthing close to finished~ Now I mest get some sleep for a few hour before my ride gets here. -_-;;

Pink is the new black.

COMEONBONEHEAD.unf.

party over here??? aw hell yes. UNF.

go bonehead it's your barfday ~(* *~)

Goooo Geneva! :D

I told you Rae, too busy as it is. you can make your own porn, specially since your not paying me Xo not quite done yet, but I will be. one more page to do then spiffing it up with tones and text~ this wont roll >D

Uploaded! CHOKE ON THAT BONEY ASS. porn?

Porn? Any...way...Porn? Good luck, I hope it rocks. But if it just rolls I won't hate you.

God that's sexy. Go Dan! Lookin forward to that porn! and Battle! xD

I've been waiting for battles from both of you mofos! MAKE IT SWEEEEET. Sweet... virgin battle.

This promises to be sexy. Oh yeah.

gonna smack down yo' boney ass ;)