Thanks everybody for the awesome feedback!! I just wanted to mention, since Jesse asked and it might not be THAT clear, but the scar that I gave to Lee is a) he's a real boy now (for as long as Matt decides to keep that and b) he has the goddessess' mark on his chest, which you can kind of see in the last pin-up page. The full mark is on page 6, in case any of you want to see it for future reference.

Oh the SHAME! and Jake.. yea.. there's some backreading. If you scroll up i already said that the intro pages went missing (still can't find them). Thanks for the critique everyone.. i owe you guys too.

monkey man, tis a shame! wyvern, tis an awesome! those colors were great! and your story was self contained and complete. and you actually used action lines! those rocked like everyone else. i was impressed with the white lighting to bad you couldnt color the chicks...

Wyv, I adore the two toned pages in the beginning as I mentioned over on DA. I think you did a pretty good job with this. I like the colors on pages 6 and 7 too. I've gotta learn to work with color like that. Matt, yours had some good action shots in it but yeah real life sucks balls sometimes. Looking forward to your next battle

MaxxMatt: Aside from the low quality, I wanted to note that I liked your action shots, I thought they had the energy they needed and you did well there. I just didnt understand exactly what was going on here (is there some back reading I need to do?) Wyvern: Awesome job, plain and simple! Those brightly lit shots were incredibly well done (I've gotta learn to pull off good lighting like that too). And a funny ending to boot. Thanks for the great read! *swig*

Loved it Kate, really like the beginning with the two tones, looks slick. Good writing too, liked the whole thing. I was not disappointed. Maxx-Woulda rocked man, sorry it didn't come through for ya. I definitely know what that's like. I do like what I see though.

What... what exactly was the scar on either side? It was very unclear to me.

BLEEEEEE TINY MONKEYS!!! omgMatt, I so wish you'd had more time with yours, 'cause even that rushed version was awwweeesooome! XD I really liked some of the moves you pulled in the fights sequence, and man, I just like your character. I'm glad you liked what I was able to pull off for you buddeh, you totally deserved it. Kura - Well thanks for all the kind words there!! I know, I'm a gradient-whore, but in a lot of those pages I was rushed and hated how vacant parts of it looked, so I just slapped on olde reliable. :B I'll be trying new things...I promise. ^^

Matt:Well the decline in quality has already been explained, but ill just point out something in your panelwork that really bugs me. Page two had like no borders, and without those borders you could easily get lost in which way you're supposed to go. There's just no solid foundations for you images ya know what i mean? There's this string of tiny-liefeld feet you have going on, mainly for that girl in the first page...and on top of that your figures tend to have these midget legs that are too short for the torsos. Lengthen the legs and take into consideration how tall they are in relation to the space you've given them. wyv: I really like that whole part where kali comes to the realization that Lee is better than her...I was expecting to see a grand chorographed fight where Kali has to use her wits to win....but then she just hit him with her symbol and the rest is just text... then it just kinda died there. I also question the usage of the gradient backgrounds. Somtimes they worked (page 4, panel 4) sometimes they didnt (page two panel two). Perhaps it's just a moderation issue to not overuse them. That two tone fight sequence in the begginning was the shit though.

I almost laughed when u appologised for how rushed YOURS was, Kate. I love the story on yours.. and as we've already spoken on MSN you know i had alot better story planned for this before things got all hectic. I love yours. I really do. So just like i said before.. i owe you better. So better you shall have. That's all i'm sayin'. :)

well this was shameful. my own fault, i guess. working full time and what not.. ugh. the worst part is that the pages that WERE done really well.. i can't find. like honestly.. vanished. so there SHOULD be a three page intro of Rage-Su breaking into the Goddess's realm and convincing her to lend him one of her people to battle with Lee. Man.. i didn't even want to end it the way i did but i had so little time. I feel like i owe Void better than what i've been giving so after this i'll be working on a beyond battle to show the skill i keep saying i have.

go wyvern go! scar his..... ego...

Monkey-Lee had returned with a flying vengance of kung-fu!!!!

can't believe I didn't notice this SCARS OH SH-- Good to see you back on the fighting circuit, monkey-boy

oh noesss

Oh snap. :O

lies! we're not doing this at all!! Ok.. we are. and it's gonna be HOT. Fight! Fight! Fight!

Allrighty, let's do this again, and this time let's do it RIGHT PROPA!!