wow! kick ass comic monday! XD i like the new view to agent black. its pretty cool.

imm soo sad to see some one turn in just straight roughs thats wat suck by doing every thing digitaly maybe next time pick up a pencil. thats all i have to say. monday great job...at points i was like huh but it was intertaining. keep up the good work.

Monday dude, ur work is being debated. What an honor. Just like true works of art. Agent Black in any form is good Agent Black. Even an Agent Black with a vagina and sentient long nose hair!

While my favourite Agent Black comic thus far has to have been his fight with cirrus - and that was as comprehensible and wordy as the French section of a weed-whacker manual - I have to say I'd be rather disapointed if Monday reverted to that style of dialogue and narrative. To be able to execute a story deftly and make efficient use of words is (IMHO) the ultimate achievment an author can strive for. And recently that is what Monday appears to have been heading toward. But this is only personal opinion presented here for the sake of debate.

- right to the point that you WIShed you were on a psychotropic drug frenzy or have an easy access to a japanese theater major.

worry nothing about it fanta; once I get a good size fight going, I'll be so verbose as fuck my pages will BLEEEED with metaphors and self indulgent paradigms !!

Kev: I went thru ur pages and they surprisingly have a LOT of potential! I havnt seen any of ur finished art before but i can tell from these breakdowns u must be quite skilled (especially to challenge Monday on ur maiden battle). Ur panels and pacing have a hollywood blockbuster bank heist feel to it. I especially loved the \"Boom!\" on page 1 and then \"20 minutes ago\" on the next page. Page 5 onwards just loses it though. Which i can only guess was due to poor planning (2 hours did u say??). Very promising pages. Please finish them for us to see. Its a darn shame. Monday: Your art is constantly improving. Clarity is making a big difference. Awesome sense of action and motion. Your narratives - though still awesome and peerless in Void IMO - seem to be gettin more simplified. Which is not necessarily a bad thing either. I remember ur very early fights were dense - brilliant no doubt - but may have estranged some of the casual Void readers: the ones who just wanted a quick pulp read. This and ur last fight have been very accessible reads. But who am i to say what u should do. You obviously have a love for telling stories (those inks must be a compound of ur blood and sweat!). Dont compromise for nobody. ;) Last note: i loved the white room ending. Almost a fitting ending to the Agent Black saga.

I anticipated a lot from KevJB. space out your workload. It's only unbearable if you think of it as a finished piece. Just start working on something, and alot an amount of time to it to work on it each day that you know you have. I was as impressed and astounded as I always am with your work, Monday.

Pretty much all that's worth saying has been said, so I won't tag too much on. Monday, that was very cool. You constantly impress me with both art and story, and I thank you for it. There are some spots where things to get confusing, and I think that you should spend a bit more time on anatomy (ie, proportions and shapes). Girl's figure seemed a bit inconsistent to me, like she was slim and short one second, but taller and filled out the next. Page 8 splash was GOLD, by the way. Keep it up.

Kev: Finish next time, thats all I can say. Monday: Good work I had a little bit of trouble in some pages following the action, 7 was particularly confusing to me, but over all a very good read. Your anatomy seems to fluctuate rapidly from panel to panel. I didn't mind it too much though. Good work.

KevJB: I don't.. really understand. What was happening in the other 334 hours of the two weeks? You might have been better off using the two hours to rough out three readable pages instead of these nine. I honestly can't tell what's going on in most of them. I'm not putting you down, just trying to point out that in this case a much smaller amount of pages might've gotten you a much better score. Monday: XD Your art is great, but what I really -really- love, is your choice of words. The dialogue is just awesome. Maybe it's that style of writing I'm in love with, or your just that good, I dunno.

Kev, i love your character and you let me down man. But im sure you will wow us next time. GOOD LUCK with future battles. Monday, quality and quantity.....thank you

I admit for two weeks I overshot on the story and was forced to rush it-as well decide ONCE again on two different versions of storyline. I cant say this has been a personal best for me. But I managed to really go on overdrive whenever the moment presented itself. Overall what ended up was a horrible disfigurement of the storyline to action ratio but at least the plot went on track with what I intended. Thanks to everyone who commented, I can see that I'm somewhat doing better at some aspects. And Kev, dont sweat it, once you have something out I'll be more than happy to see it. . . . . . . or else >:E

KevJB regardless of the circumstances you were under, this is a pretty rough comic. It's unfinished so I won't make any further comment other than I now look forward to seeing a finished work from you. Monday - the large blank spaces around panels in your comic made your pages feel empty, and these spaces were somewhat distracting too. I didn't find the story as engaging as your last two comics either. Otherwise seems in pretty good knick.

Monday.... good battle, good action.... althought it feels a lot lately like you are sacrificing anatomy and proportion for the sake of action scenes..... maybe slow it down a bit and take mroe time on completing the art so it looks nicer, and then get back to the huge action sequences. Still a good showing though. 2 hours and nothing done, Kev?... hopefully this wont become a trend..... Pick your battles wisely, and please try to have something to show next time. 2 weeks is an aweful long time to have gone without making anything.

Monday, No words I have can describe my feelings towards this comic (in a good way). Keep on rockin. KvJB, no words i have can describe how i feel about this comic (in a bad way). This is a pitiful way to debut. Try not to be too ambitious to the point where you cant handle it anymore.

*eyes tear up* that was beautiful monday... just beautiful...

It's a terrible thing to realize that you have only 2 hours left and you haven't done anything... I feel like a bad person. I guess I'll upload the roughs. (That I did in the 2 hours...)

Oh uploaded btw. Good luck Kev.

Scanning and editing. Sincere apologies to Kev for the lack of content in the plot. With all the subcharacters and backstory your character has, it's practically criminal for me not to have done them.

whee agent vs agent. haha kinda reminds me of spy vs spy. dunno why but i wanna see wat will happen. =D

I came.

Computers been put in the shop to get worked on. a minor thing, I should hopefully get it back in a day IF the problem isn't as serious as I imagine it to be.

I look forward your first battle kev >:D

HAHA! I KNEW THIS WOULD COME! KICKASS!