THANK YOU!!! oh my God Joe you just made my day right now. Finally someone who accepts my work without those pesky colors! But for those who wants to see colors, my fight Zombi was started in color so I have to end it in color. Expect it like around the end of April.

I have nothing to say that hasn't been said. I agree with all comments above except those wishing for Mamoru's colors. Those inks were slick enough all by themselves. (I'm gonna get my trash kicked on my return >_>; )

i like that kick, mize *takes notes*

hahahah...It looks like you know what you were doing all along. Good Job. Moo you did good to, I just wish you finish with the inking. But it was good.

Mamoru: The sense of action in your comic is great, very entartaining from start to finish. My only complain is that I'd like to see some more detail though I know you made 3 battles in one week so it was pretty good for all the job. Anonymooo: The fact that you didn't get to finish the piece really took points down in everything, the action scenes doesn't look as cool as they would and the story-telling lacks impact.

Mamoru outta the three fights you did this was my favourite. It was well drawn and was very entertaining. The fight was coreographed real;ly well Moo, i love your stuff but PLEASE dont continue your drawing to the edge of the paper uless its for effect. I see alot of people who refuse to put even a thin border around the edge of the paper. TRUST MEyour stuff will look alot better if you peoperly panel it. Shame you didnt get it all done tho i liekd where you were goin with it

I also forgot to mention - Mamoru - if you're going to join two or more pages together - please, please PLEASE join them vertically instead of side by side. It's so much easier to read when all you have to do is scroll down, instead of having scroll down, then up - then over - and then down again.

ah, the calssic barroom brawl. Mize: hell's yes. it's good to see you bumping up your coriography a notch. not that your preivious fight wer bad, but it seems like a lot of the time, the flames and action lines would take the place of actual movment. plus, you managed to get the background in there during the fight multiple times! bonus points for that. and it seemed to me like you wrote moo really well. the bad: i miss your color, although that's harsh to say, because you seem to be embracing the blacks a bit more. wish i could be more helpful, but i'm not really seeing much i'm unhappy with. good panel to panel flow too. Moo: impressive! i would say your biggest problem, in you other battles, was your weak perspective. you seem to have really gone that extra mile in this one with perspective and flow. but...then you didn't finish it. why not? it would have been fantastic if we could have seen this, all done. give yourself some more time for the next one would be my suggestion. plus, i really don't buy the \"drawing straws\" idea. it's interesting, but it doesn't make much sense, knowing mize's character. all in all, it was entertaining. look forward to seeing you fight phil.

Foreshortening is difficult anyways. Thank you, everybody, for the help with the work. Pong was halfway right--the \"life happen\" special move DID happen, causing me to have to turn in this half-assed comic. I apologize for that, but I'm also looking at it in the positive light that I didn't default this time. JESUS CHRIST, Mize, that comic rocked. Beautiful choreography reminiscent of an old Lau Kar Leung movie, mixed with slick renditions of Mal (you're the first to try him) and Mooo, with that commentary I dig so much. Also love how P2's bar has a device to cut off chi-flow--very damn slick, all in all. Thank you again. ^_^ Next up: Mooo vs. Phill II!

Well, it looks like I don't have much left to comment on. Moo - your figures are generally good, but work on your foreshortening. Mal looks very off in the last panel of page 4. Also, some of your faces look a bit warped.

Oh man I was wrong. Looks like mooo's special move wasn't used in this fight. Somebody stole it.

Forget color, I'll take the black and white contrast with its speedy, impactive benefits. Void could use more moves like these.

Pretty good, but I'm sorry to see most of your fight unfinished mooo. Mize: Great stuff man, personally I wish you would of given yourself more time to color man, you know I like those colors of yours ;) Not much for me to nitpick man, hobbes might be able to nail ya in some areas. Mooo: Half finished means half the quality points from me man. Bobo nailed it when he mentioned the faces, you gotta watch out for things like that. Only way I could figure out who was who was by the glasses. But other than that this was a good entry, but I had to give it to mize. BTW: Let's have our rematch very soon. Both good, Keep it up or something?

Mamoru... I'm pretty much speechless. Your lineart is amazing--too bad it's not in color, but that's definitely understandable. Only a few problems I noticed. First off, P2's face looks way screwed up on page 6. His scar is missing on the next page lol. Other than that, amazing fight. Oh, and watch out for typos and spelling errors--maybe you can get someone to edit for you if you have trouble with words. No big, though. Mooo... This might have been a good battle, but the inking stopped less than halfway through. That sucks, man. Also, there were many panels that I looked at thinking WTF?! and Mooo and Mize looked pretty much the same when you showed only headshots. Still an entertaining battle, but disappointing as well.

This one is first, then Veronica, then Fel. It shows in each end of the comic which is next as well

gahh which one goes first in Mize's chronological order ?

This'll be bitchin'.

Done!! *dashes to Veronica and P2*

I think all y'all's crazy. Of course, I'm thinkin' 1-week battles right off the bat, so who am I to talk? HUH!? WHO!? THAT'S RIGHT, A MONKEY WITH A MOUSTACHE!!!

Dont worry, I'll handle it - Hyper Raver chipmunk mix-.mp3

YOU ARE NUTS, SIR: THE REPRISE

Mooo.... >_> Remind me to slap you next time I get my AIM to work.

I'll follow all this with interest

Pong is talking about the \"Life happen special\" I'd imagine. (Nelson here) Good luck to both contenders.

I think a tight deadline like this works better for me, since it doesn't give me time for other stuff to come up. >_< Thanks again to Mize for offering this challenge, and I'm wondering what \"signature move\" Pong is talking about. XD

Bro. I know were going on brake and all but what the f*&# are you doing!!! P.S. JELLY JELLY JELLY JELLY^^

Hmmmm. Mooo's going to use his \"signature move\" for this match. I'm sure of it.

dont worry, I got this all organized. This also goes with all of my upcoming and ongoing battles. So dont worry everyone, Ill try my best. And to Moo, I thank you once again.

Odd, I was just thinking of a rematch against mooo, Good luck you two!

Mamoru, can you handle it?!