i suppose it is closing speech time Monday Nice story and i loved the way you made shrapnel girl fight it was awesome thisbattle has shown me some elements that i have not been using that i really desire to incorporate into my stories i'm sure this isn't the last time that agent black and Shrapnel girl will cross paths and if i lose then Hey you added a new power to haruka because i never thought of the emp blast so i can do nothing except say thank you Mr Monday it was an honor to battle you your battle was great and i really enjoyed the fact that you used things that were relevant to haruka's story thanks alot and thanks for the *Invite*

Well it's about closing time, thanks to everyone took the time to read this, voted on it even, and felt compelled enough to right my path to making better works in the future. It is greatly appreciated. This is my more recent attempts at trying to really choreograph a story flow and I can safely say that I'm on the right path thanks to those who appreciated such a thrown together work that was done in days. Its practically a miracle that my score is high as it is > >. and 4.00 Am you fought a good fight, Im practically at the edge of my two legged stool at how close this battle got. I especially liked how you braved into Agent Black's mysterious nature in combat I believe I owe everyone an explanation in due time . Once I figure out his ending.

Okay, now that ive had a chance to go through both of them properly.. very impressed... Story wise i think Monday, youve got it (sucker for conitnuing stories), but art wise 4:00Am has ya beat, at least in my opion... Still, great job from both of you... now, how do i vote? that is teh question.

I loved both stories great job good luck you two

Shrapnel, I love the different suits and the heart-shaped explosion at the end, your quality and style were great. Black, good quality too, but I think Agent Black wasn't in there enough. The magnetic knives were cool shit though.

actually the consequences of her actions would LEAD to the deactivation of her nanytes. That action being, the use of an EMP blast which would throw off the magnetism in Miranda's knives if not neutralize them. (Also programmed by nanytes- but ultimately manipulated by her gloves) Which would explain why there was a large scale electronic short-out which lead to: 1. G_______'s computer shorting out 2. and Coral sneezing. Subtle hints that was supposed to suggest a widescale electronic attack that is a fault on my part for not expressing suffectiently in my sequentials. But even with her nanytes in a dormant state; Haruka was able to move about (with much difficulty) in manual mode with the last of her concious centers; her brain. I hope this explains the reasoning behind my move if not it's \"projected\" scientific technicalities. Glad you enjoyed the battle.

Hello Monday I just wanna start by saying I really enjoy your work. It's very creative an dextremely enthrawling, But as I was looking over this fight with Shrapnel Girl I noticed something of a scientific flaw in the story line...I am sure you already noticed this but on page 7 of your battle Shrapnel Girl seems to have figured out the only apperant way to stop from being pelted by knives, she \"deactivates\" her nanites.....well my only problem with this is...does that mean she changed there metallic make-up? I mean the throwing knoves are attracted to the metal of the nanites....not the healing power of them? So correct me if I am wrong but it is not really very accurate to state magnatism as the problem....Forgive me if I sound crude...I am a big fan and only thought that this would help in further reasearch of your later foes. I too hope that one day soon to have the honor of battling you. Till then thank you for listening.

Dam angent black comic is cool but i got confuse who was that guy on the computer that said blaster.....i hope its not ME!!!!!!!

Very creative, both sides. I particularly liked the Shrapnel Girl story. Very unorthodox presentation, story unique and well suited to the character.

Wow, great battle both of you. I am speechless. 400AM - Great one liners and gritty art. The pixelated text bugged me a little, but otherwise solid work! Monday - I was a little confused in the beginnging, but it pulled together quickly. Good flow and great action! It's a toughie!

HO'SNAP 4:00am: I really enjoyed the different colors you used through-out your story; it really captures the reader's imagination and attention. Maybe my favorite thing about your comic had to be it's dialogue. Classic man, real classic. Mr.Monday: What can I really say? I've always been a huge fan of your story telling abilities and killer art complementing it. Such lovely black and white contrast, it takes my breath away. I love what you decided to do with Haruka in your entry, she seems like she'd fit in quite nicely with the rest of them. : ) Both these stories really tickled my fancy, which makes it so incredibly hard to vote on. I also further entertain myself by imagining that Mr.Monday's entry happened first eventually followed by 4:00am's. A kid can dream.

Kudos to the both of you. 4:00Am I never expected Black to be quite the player, that was very funny. Monday making her a fellow teacher? Hmm, I'd say you're doing the same thing she is at a slower pace....you premature \"shooting\" bastard. XD

i officially dont know who to vote for: crazy demented psycho action, or good storytelling action.. action... help

So Pio, is Theatre Hazard gonna be a \"gang\" now? Like the Alliance or Respark? 'Cause that would be awesome. <3 -Jesse

At present, 10 pages is the maximum that can be displayed in battles. If you have mroe then ten, you need to double them up, like Colususs did in his Coral fights recently. Sorry for the delay. Will be up ASAP.

i was really was look forward on this fight to see what comic it will look like

Short Delay due to problems with 4:00 AM 's submisson.......Read the FAQ, people.....read the FAQ

Reporting live from the storeroom of Circuit city . Luckily i have a friend that works here otherwise i would've been shot on sight. anyways my 20 pages are miraculously up in the 7 days i got to work on this. And 4:00 am you'll always get better if you keep at it. that's why this battle is an invitation to something I'm starting. See you in the battlefield ; whenever my connection decides to work that is.

...and thank god for Shinyo.

I'm glad I'm patient...

rock his battle is proably better than mine any way best of luck monday i didn't do you justice next time gadget Next time

Monday says his internet is still down. Fortunately, he has friends like me who live close by. He says he'll have the pages uploaded by tommorrow.

I Got 11 crazy pages and Only 12 hours left ! I have to go to a driving exam today. ANd worse off; the internet in my room isn't working !! rest assured I will have the pages in if you allow me. -A cry for help, from my dad's clinic, Monday

ugh...

the rumors are true...suspence does kill...

This should be very enertaing, lookign foward to it guys =)

Sorry the art is a lil wonky on this one in fact i don't really like it I'll try to improve before i ever challange you again

OH MAAN only one week to work on this battle X3 Im really gonna overdrive it now :E

must... see... Agent Black... retaliation...'ugh'

Good luck guys!! *whispers hoarsely* Go 4:00am go!

Oh youve made My week I shall definetley consider this one of my christmas presents

well , I can't back out on my word right ? Let's begin this lovely dance.